Incidences of obesity have risen over the years. It is believed to be a consequence of over consumption of fast food and hence some people argue that the government should increase the tax on such foods. In my opinion, this approach is unlikely to yield the desired result.
In the first place, increasing tax on fast food is unlikely to reduce its consumption. Actually, most people who consume it are already well aware of the health consequences of its consumption; however, their busy schedules do not permit them to cook proper meals at home. Hence, they opt for readymade meals. They will buy packaged food even if the price is high because they cannot or do not want to cook healthy food at home. Hence, a higher tax will have little impact on fast food consumption especially among middle and higher income groups. At the same time, it will put a burden on the lower strata of the society. Many of these people subsist on fast food because they cannot afford healthy food. By increasing the tax on fast food, the government will only add to their woes.
A better solution is to make healthy food more affordable and available to all sections of the society. The government can open eateries all over the country where it can sell healthy meals at affordable prices. It should also enact laws that make it mandatory for fast food companies to ensure the quality of their foods.
In conclusion, there is no one-size-fits-all solution to combat obesity, and a higher tax on fast food is not the one we need. What the government should do is to make healthy meals more and more affordable.
Incidences of obesity have risen over the years. It
is believed
to be a consequence of over
consumption
of
fast
food
and
hence
some
people
argue that the
government
should increase the
tax
on such
foods
. In my opinion, this approach is unlikely to yield the desired result.
In the
first
place, increasing
tax
on
fast
food
is unlikely to
reduce
its
consumption
. Actually, most
people
who consume it are already well aware of the health consequences of its
consumption
;
however
, their busy schedules do not permit them to cook proper
meals
at home.
Hence
, they opt for
readymade
meals
. They will
buy
packaged
food
even if the price is high
because
they cannot or do not want to cook
healthy
food
at home.
Hence
, a higher
tax
will have
little
impact on
fast
food
consumption
especially
among middle and higher income groups. At the same time, it will put a burden on the lower strata of the society.
Many
of these
people
subsist on
fast
food
because
they cannot afford
healthy
food
. By increasing the
tax
on
fast
food
, the
government
will
only
add
to their woes.
A better solution is to
make
healthy
food
more affordable and available to all sections of the society. The
government
can open eateries all over the country where it can sell
healthy
meals
at affordable prices. It should
also
enact laws that
make
it mandatory for
fast
food
companies
to ensure the quality of their foods.
In conclusion
, there is no one-size-fits-all solution to combat obesity, and a higher
tax
on
fast
food
is not the one we need. What the
government
should do is to
make
healthy
meals
more and more affordable.
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