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in some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of the doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this? v.1

in some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of the doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this? v. 1
Nowadays, it has become more common to see that the rules restricting teens from coming outdoors without an adult are implemented in certain areas. This is intended to safeguard the teens from getting into any kind of trouble. Although there are people who talk against it, there are also people who vote for it. Although, there restrictions are intended to provide safety for teenagers, they are somehow lowering the morale of the teens in some regard. This usually happens when we are told not to do something on our own, just because of some bad examples around. This curfew diminishes the chances of the teens who always love to experiment with their lives. Some people believe that teenagers must be allowed to move freely as they should experience and learn for themselves the good and bad, even though some argue against it. Conservative parents always encourage these restrictions as they think that it will be an unnecessary risk to allow their children at night for any reason because of the recent incidents for example robbery and snatches. However, these restrictions are common near the forest areas, as the wild animals may attack people at night. As teenagers would not have a license to carry a gun for their safety, they are needed to be accompanied by an adult. Some areas are situated far away from the downtown and it becomes impossible for the teenagers to commute all alone. Also, there are no proper for example, street lights and pavements making it dangerous for them to travel alone. In a nutshell, the more secluded the area is, the more common these types of restrictions would be. Finally to summarize based on all the above reasons and focusing on the safety of the future generation, I believe that these restrictions are to be followed wherever necessary. This will ensure that teenagers do not have any unpleasant experiences in their life.
Nowadays, it has become more common to
see
that the
rules
restricting
teens
from coming outdoors without an adult
are implemented
in certain
areas
. This
is intended
to safeguard the
teens
from getting into any kind of trouble. Although there are
people
who talk against it, there are
also
people
who vote for it.

Although, there
restrictions
are intended
to provide safety for
teenagers
, they are somehow lowering the morale of the
teens
in
some
regard. This
usually
happens when we are
told
not to do something on our
own
,
just
because
of
some
bad
examples around. This curfew diminishes the chances of the
teens
who always
love
to experiment with their
lives
.
Some
people
believe that
teenagers
must
be
allowed
to
move
freely
as they should experience and learn for themselves the
good
and
bad
,
even though
some
argue against it. Conservative parents always encourage these
restrictions
as they
think
that it will be an unnecessary
risk
to
allow
their children at night for any reason
because
of the recent incidents
for example
robbery and snatches.

However
, these
restrictions
are common near the forest
areas
, as the wild animals may attack
people
at night. As
teenagers
would not have a license to carry a gun for their safety, they
are needed
to
be accompanied
by an adult.
Some
areas
are situated
far away from the downtown and it becomes impossible for the
teenagers
to commute all alone.
Also
, there are no proper
for example
, street lights and pavements making it
dangerous
for them to travel alone. In a nutshell, the more secluded the
area
is, the more common these types of
restrictions
would be.

Finally
to summarize
based on all the above reasons and focusing on the safety of the future generation, I believe that these
restrictions
are to
be followed
wherever necessary. This will ensure that
teenagers
do not have any unpleasant experiences in their life.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay in some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of the doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
318 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
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