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In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. v.16

In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. v. 16
Nowadays, there are so many worldwide recognised car manufacturers in the world and numbers of produced cars have significantly increased which reflected on traffic problem, and it seems that this will never stop. Therefore, some people think this is kind of alarming and needs an urgent resolution of this situation. In my essay, I would like to talk about preventive works what can eliminate the critical condition on the roads and how best we may improve it. I would like to indicate that there is almost everywhere suffers from the mentioned subject and big countries should implement the solution of how it could be recovered from the situation. So, it has to be plan properly in terms of standardisation rules in Asia for example to letting private car owners to pay taxes according to the range of cars on the annual basis. Another one possibly will help if they stop old cars to be used on the roads. In order to make this, we must pay fixed amount of sum as per year of every car, this will be a good turnaround for metal manufacturing. The prices are requiring being expensive no matter whichever range or type of this car is. Then the government can spend all collected and finance to the road management and increase the quality public transportation. The disadvantage, in this case, is when you try to reduce the number of old cars, possible this will affect a majority of people who will not able to afford to buy a new car. Especially, big countries such as China, Russia, US, Brazil, Canada and Australia will struggle without transportation activities for the long distances. Overall, I believe that there might be the implementation of the specially designed small cars which will be cheap, comfortable and can be used for such a purpose.
Nowadays, there are
so
many
worldwide
recognised
car
manufacturers in the world and numbers of produced
cars
have
significantly
increased which reflected on traffic problem, and it seems that this will never
stop
.
Therefore
,
some
people
think
this is kind of alarming and needs an urgent resolution of this situation. In my essay, I would like to talk about preventive works what can eliminate the critical condition on the roads and how best we may
improve
it.

I would like to indicate that there is almost everywhere suffers from the mentioned subject and
big
countries should implement the solution of how it could
be recovered
from the situation.
So
, it
has to
be
plan
properly
in terms of
standardisation
rules
in Asia
for example
to letting private
car
owners to pay taxes according to the range of
cars
on the annual basis. Another one
possibly
will
help
if they
stop
old
cars
to be
used
on the roads. In order to
make
this, we
must
pay
fixed
amount of sum as per year of every
car
, this will be a
good
turnaround for metal manufacturing. The prices are requiring being expensive no matter whichever range or type of this
car
is. Then the
government
can spend all collected and finance to the road management and increase the quality public transportation.

The disadvantage,
in this case
, is when you try to
reduce
the number of
old
cars
, possible this will affect a majority of
people
who will not able to afford to
buy
a new
car
.
Especially
,
big
countries such as China, Russia, US, Brazil, Canada and Australia will struggle without transportation activities for the long distances.

Overall
, I believe that there might be the implementation of the
specially
designed
small
cars
which will be
cheap
, comfortable and can be
used
for such a purpose.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. v. 16

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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