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In order to solve traffic problems government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. Advantage and disadvantages? v.2

In order to solve traffic problems government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. Advantage and disadvantages? v. 2
Nowadays, Traffic is one of the most important problems around the world. So authority has taken various steps to control traffic problems. The ministry's takes a step to control traffic problems through taxation, but it has certain limitations too. Above essay will examine the pros and cons of state should tax private machine owners heavily and provide a logical conclusion. The most important benefit is minister's should impose heavy taxes to private auto owners and collect all the funds and spend money to improve public transportation. Nowadays public transport is not good. The other benefit is, if ministries impose more taxes most of the private car owners don't drive an automobile for their it is the working hours. It is a correct time to protect the air pollution. Private car owners stopped their service automatically public transport must develop multidimensional and get revenue from the public. On the others hand, there are some limitations too. Authority imposes the taxes to private bus owners that time motor owners are affecting their life and they are facing a lot of problems in their life. Most of the auto owners don't know any other job they are always depending that job only, For instance, if they give up and go any other work they don't work professionally. That action creates problems between employee and employer. In my conclusion, It's not a way to develop public transportation. Ministry's should find out alternative solution to improve public transport facilities and some time power should take various steps to control private wagon owners. Though the state impose taxes to private wagon owners heavily, It is not for the best solution.
Nowadays, Traffic is one of the most
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important
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problems
around the world.
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So
authority has taken various steps to control traffic
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problems
. The ministry's takes a step to control traffic
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problems
through taxation,
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but
it has certain limitations too. Above essay will examine the pros and cons of state should
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tax
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private
machine
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owners
heavily
and provide a logical conclusion.

The most
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important
benefit is minister's should
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impose
heavy
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taxes
to
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private
auto
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owners
and collect all the funds and spend money to
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improve
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public
transportation. Nowadays
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public
transport is not
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good
. The
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benefit is, if ministries
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impose
more
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taxes
most of the
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private
car
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owners
don't drive an automobile for their it is the working hours. It is a correct time to protect the air pollution.
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car
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owners
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stopped
their service
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public
transport
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must
develop multidimensional and
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get
revenue from the public.

On the others hand, there are
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limitations too. Authority
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imposes
the
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taxes
to
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private
bus
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owners
that time motor
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owners
are affecting their
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life and
they are facing
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problems
in their life. Most of the auto
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owners
don't know any
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other
job they are always
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depending
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, if they give up and go any
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other
work they don't work
professionally
. That action creates
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problems
between employee and employer.

In my conclusion, It's not a way to develop
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public
transportation. Ministry's should find out alternative solution to
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improve
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public
transport facilities and
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some
time power should take various steps to control
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private
wagon
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owners
. Though the state
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impose
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taxes
to
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private
wagon
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owners
heavily
, It is not for the best solution.
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IELTS essay In order to solve traffic problems government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. Advantage and disadvantages? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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