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In many parts of the world and throughout history, government have moved their capitals. Discuss the potential problems and benefits? Say whether you would be in favor of moving your capital? v.2

In many parts of the world and throughout history, government have moved their capitals. Discuss the potential problems and benefits? Say whether you would be in favor of moving your capital? v. 2

Should any governments move their capitals? This is one of the contentious issue, people maintain disparate opinions on this. From my perspective, government must move their capitals inasmuch as the following reasons. First, any city have the chance of development and well-known for the other foreigners.

Should any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 their capitals? This is one of the contentious issue, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 maintain disparate opinions on this. From my perspective, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 their capitals inasmuch as the following reasons.

First
, any city have the chance of development and well-known for the other foreigners. 

1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay In many parts of the world and throughout history, government have moved their capitals. Discuss the potential problems and benefits? Say whether you would be in favor of moving your capital? v. 2

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American English

2 paragraphs

46 words

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