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In many parts of the world and throughout history, government have moved their capitals. Discuss the potential problems and benefits? Say whether you would be in favor of moving your capital? v.2

In many parts of the world and throughout history, government have moved their capitals. Discuss the potential problems and benefits? Say whether you would be in favor of moving your capital? v. 2
Should any governments move their capitals? This is one of the contentious issue, people maintain disparate opinions on this. From my perspective, government must move their capitals inasmuch as the following reasons. First, any city have the chance of development and well-known for the other foreigners.
Should any
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governments
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move
their capitals? This is one of the contentious issue,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
maintain disparate opinions on this. From my perspective,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
their capitals inasmuch as the following reasons.

First
, any city have the chance of development and well-known for the other foreigners.
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0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay In many parts of the world and throughout history, government have moved their capitals. Discuss the potential problems and benefits? Say whether you would be in favor of moving your capital? v. 2

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