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You are travelling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter include: Where you are goingWhat the favor is? Why you need this friend to help? v.1

You are travelling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter include: Where you are goingWhat the favor is? Why you need this friend to help? v. 1
There are split opinions regarding the topic. Fewer people opine that the person who have same choice is the best option as a companion, whereas the rest of the individuals reckon that it is better to make a friend who have different ideas or thoughts. However, both have its own pros and cons. Therefore, I am going to shed light on providing statement in the following piece of writing along with my opinion. On the face of statement, there are multiple factors to support the former notion, but the foremost reason is that, the buddies who have equal preferences are more cooperative with each others. As a result, there is less conflicts between them, which is essential for the friendship. For instance, a survey by 'The Tribune' which Reveals that 25% friendships are broken every year in India, due to conflicts regarding daily matters. Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that a person with divergent ideas is far better than former one. The most prominent reason behind this is that, every person has own thinking ability, which helps with the others to mitigate their problems, also helps them to learn new skills. Thus, that type of pals helps to others for overall growth of personality. For example, in school time, when students prepared project in a group learnt lots of skills from other pupils. In a nutshell, nevertheless, weighing the both opinions, I consider that there is no single conclusion. As per my perception, having a friend who have sometime disagreed with you is the best partner as compared to the individual who have Similar desires.
There
are split
opinions regarding the topic. Fewer
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people
opine that the person
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who
have same choice is the best option as a companion, whereas the rest of the individuals reckon that it is better to
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make
a friend
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who
have
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different
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ideas
or thoughts.
However
, both have its
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own
pros and cons.
Therefore
, I am going to shed light on providing statement in the following piece of writing along with my opinion.

On the face of statement, there are multiple factors to support the former notion,
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but
the foremost reason is that, the buddies
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
have equal preferences are more cooperative with each
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "other"?
others
.
As a result
,
Did you mean "there are less conflicts"?
there is less conflicts
between them, which is essential for the friendship.
For instance
, a survey by 'The Tribune'
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which


Reveals that 25% friendships
are broken
every year in India, due to conflicts regarding daily matters.

Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
believe that a person with divergent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
is far better than former one. The most prominent reason behind this is that, every person has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
thinking ability, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
with the others to mitigate their problems,
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
them to learn new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.
Thus
, that type of pals
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to others for
overall
growth of personality.
For example
, in school time, when students prepared project in a group
Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.
learnt
lots of
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skills
from
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other
pupils.

In a nutshell,
nevertheless
, weighing the both opinions, I consider that there is no single conclusion. As per my perception, having a friend
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
have sometime disagreed with you is the best partner as compared to the individual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
have

Similar desires.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay You are travelling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter include: Where you are goingWhat the favor is? Why you need this friend to help? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
272 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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