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You are traveling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter, include: -Where you are going-What the favor is-Why you need this friend to help v.1

You are traveling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter, include: -Where you are going-What the favor is-Why you need this friend to help v. 1
Undoubtedly, recently, the phenomenon of climate change and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. I fully agree with this fact that although people can adapt themselves to climate changes, it is better to keep weather circumstances constant. In turn, this essay will discuss why preventing climate remodeling is better than finding a way of living in this situation. On the one hand, climate alters can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of easier living under climate changing conditions, as well as adaptability under this situation, are inextricably bound up. That is to say that people gained the capability to adapt themselves to the present climate within the millions of years, thus they cannot live easily with increased temperature, which happened recently. For instance, in forest countries, several kinds of cancers such as breast, brain, chest and stem cell cancers are extremely rare. On the other hand, climate changes might decrease the consequences of life span. Some people declare that consumption of fossil fuels increase the atmospheric pollutants as well as the water temperature causing several damages to the environment. Hence, for preventing climate changes, consumption of fossil fuels must be reduced. As a tangible example, in the recent decade that the water temperature of the world became warmer by up to 2 OC, the rate of fires increased by up to 12%. To summarize, some people are of the opinion that modification of climate change can happen easily, while others are opposed to this view. I am sure that preventing climate changes is better than adopting to this situation and enhancement of trees cultivation and reduction of consuming fossil fuels can help people to avoid the climate changes.
Undoubtedly
, recently, the phenomenon of
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climate
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change
and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. I
fully
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agree
with this fact that although
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people
can adapt themselves to
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climate
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changes
, it is better to
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keep
weather circumstances constant. In turn, this essay will discuss why preventing
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climate
remodeling is better than finding a way of living in this situation.

On the one hand,
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climate
alters can provide the society with
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some
noticeable effects which
are rooted
in the fact that the merits of easier living under
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climate
changing conditions,
as well
as adaptability under this situation, are
inextricably
bound up.
That is
to say that
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people
gained the capability to adapt themselves to the present
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climate
within the millions of years,
thus
they cannot
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live
easily
with increased temperature, which happened recently.
For instance
, in forest countries, several kinds of cancers such as breast, brain, chest and stem cell cancers are
extremely
rare.

On the other hand
,
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climate
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changes
might decrease the consequences of life span.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
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people
declare that consumption of fossil fuels increase the atmospheric pollutants
as well
as the water temperature causing several damages to the environment.
Hence
, for preventing
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climate
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changes
, consumption of fossil fuels
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must
be
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reduced
. As a tangible example, in the recent decade that the water temperature of the world became warmer by up to 2 OC, the rate of fires increased by up to 12%.

To summarize
,
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some
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people
are of the opinion that modification of
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climate
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change
can happen
easily
, while others
are opposed
to this view. I am sure that preventing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
changes
is better than adopting to this situation and enhancement of trees cultivation and reduction of consuming fossil fuels can
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help
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people
to avoid the
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climate
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changes
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
As a hawk flieth not high with one wing, even so a man reacheth not to excellence with one tongue.
Roger Ascham

IELTS essay You are traveling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter, include: -Where you are going-What the favor is-Why you need this friend to help v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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