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You recently took a long vacation In your absence a friend did you a huge favor Write a letter thanking your friend In your letter Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to v.1

You recently took a long vacation In your absence a friend did you a huge favor Write a letter thanking your friend In your letter Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation You do NOT need to v. 1
There has been a heated debate about whether extinct animals should be preserved by governments and individuals or not. A section of the society believes that human beings are beneficial from conserving them, while others argue that governments should put more attention on human beings ourselves. From my perspective, conserving endangered animals is human beings’ responsibilities and duties. Admittedly, it is a waste of resources to prevent animals from extinction for those countries who are still struggling with making their lives. Especially for developing countries and the third world, people are not living the basic condition of standard lives and will confront with huge challenges of making their own lives if the limited resources of countries are allocated to protecting endangered animals. With that said, it is essential to preserve animal species that are in the phase of extinction since their existences bring abundant benefits to human beings. To begin with, biodiversity is one of the most imperative properties that human possesses. To be more specific, human inspired from animals invents a variety of inventions, such as aeroplane, which is invented from the observation of birds, and radar, working with the principle that are same as bat’s. Moreover, a disappearance of one animal species may cause a chain reaction. To put it another way, the economic system is composed of a variety of animals, and extinction of one specie may cause the disappearance of others. Therefore, protecting animals is vital for human beings. In conclusion, although the huge financial cost of conserving endangered animals is not what every country can afford, preventing the from disappearing is greatly significant.
There has been a heated debate about whether extinct
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animals
should
be preserved
by
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governments
and individuals or not. A section of the society believes that
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human
beings are beneficial from conserving them, while others argue that
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governments
should put more attention on
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human
beings ourselves. From my perspective, conserving endangered
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animals
is
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human
beings’ responsibilities and duties.

Admittedly
, it is a waste of resources to
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prevent
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animals
from extinction for those
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countries
who are
still
struggling with making their
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lives
.
Especially
for developing
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countries
and the third world,
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people
are not living the basic condition of standard
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lives
and will confront with huge challenges of making their
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own
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lives
if the limited resources of
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countries
are allocated
to protecting endangered animals.

With that said, it is essential to preserve
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animal
species that are in the phase of extinction since their existences bring abundant benefits to
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human
beings. To
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begin
with, biodiversity is one of the most imperative properties that
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human
possesses. To be more specific,
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human
inspired from
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animals
invents a variety of inventions, such as
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aeroplane
, which
is invented
from the observation of birds, and radar, working with the principle that are same as bat’s.
Moreover
, a disappearance of one
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animal
species may cause a chain reaction. To put it another way, the economic system
is composed
of a variety of
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animals
, and extinction of one specie may cause the disappearance of others.
Therefore
, protecting
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animals
is vital for
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human
beings.

In conclusion
, although the huge financial cost of conserving endangered
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animals
is not what every
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country
can afford, preventing the
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from
disappearing is
greatly
significant.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay You recently took a long vacation In your absence a friend did you a huge favor Write a letter thanking your friend In your letter Explain what the favor was Describe how this favor helped you Offer compensation You do NOT need to v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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