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In many countries, the amount of rubbish is rapidly increasing, why? Give your solutions. v.2

In many countries, the amount of rubbish is rapidly increasing, why? Give your solutions. v. 2
In the modern age, the amount of rubbish has been a prevailing concern in the significant part of the world. A sea change has been witnessed about the amount of trash in the past. The following paragraphs would elucidate possible reasons of the problem and propose a handful of remedial measure. To commence with the reasons. The first problem is todays world holds a large number of the population and these population uses many products which create a plethora of waste. In other words, people buy and usage more products they do not need and dumping their wrappers which then turn out junk. For example, we eat water, soft drinks and its bottles end in up landfills producing garbage at an alarming rate. Another problem is non-biodegradable products are a serious threat which leads to the production of excessive misuse. It is scientifically proven that material like plastic does not decompose in the environment for several hundred thousand years. Undoubtedly, every lock has a key, so some solution should be implemented. The primary solution is the government should impose strict rules and regulation to replace plastic with a biodegradable material. Therefore, new technology should be introduced for the safe disposal of ductile material. For example, many countries in Europe now use rubbish to build roads by converting plastic to adhesive substance. As a result, this new technology should be imported so that the amount of waste would reduce. Another solution is the government introduces social awareness campaign to educate citizens, not to use products that they do not need. In conclusion, there is no denying the fact that people all over the world are producing rubbish at an alarming rate. In order to deal with this issue, the government and individuals, both should put their best foot forward together in order to curb the menace.
In the modern age, the amount of rubbish has been a prevailing concern in the significant part of the world. A sea
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change
has
been witnessed
about the amount of trash in the past. The following paragraphs would elucidate possible reasons of the problem and propose a handful of remedial measure.

To commence with the reasons. The
first
problem is
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todays
world holds
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a large number of
the population and these population
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
uses
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
which create a plethora of waste.
In other words
,
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
and usage more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
they do not need and dumping their wrappers which then turn out junk.
For example
, we eat water, soft drinks and its bottles
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
in up landfills producing garbage at an alarming rate. Another problem is non-biodegradable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
are a serious threat which leads to the production of excessive misuse. It is
scientifically
proven that material like plastic does not decompose in the environment for several hundred thousand years.

Undoubtedly
, every lock has a key,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
solution should
be implemented
. The primary solution is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should impose strict
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulation to replace plastic with a biodegradable material.
Therefore
, new technology should
be introduced
for the safe disposal of ductile material.
For example
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
countries in Europe
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
rubbish to build roads by converting plastic to adhesive substance.
As a result
, this new technology should
be imported
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that the amount of waste would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
. Another solution is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
introduces social awareness campaign to educate citizens, not to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
that they do not need.

In conclusion
, there is no denying the fact that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
all over the world are producing rubbish at an alarming rate. In order to deal with this issue, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and individuals, both should put their best foot forward together in order to curb the menace.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay In many countries, the amount of rubbish is rapidly increasing, why? Give your solutions. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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