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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.3

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 3
We live in a modern society. With all technological advances, we should have clearer living conditions across the globe, but sadly, that is not the reality. We are producing a lot more garbage in this day and age then ever before. I believe there are several reasons that amount up to this failure and we should work hard to resolve or address each of them. Firstly, the population around the globe has increased almost exponentially in recent years. To manage the growth of the population, the government of every country needs to put an extra effort to being awareness, so that it doesn't harm our lives. For example, I learned a lot from a recent seminar held at a local library, about how to produce less garbage. Prevention is always better than the cure. If people are equipped with the desired knowledge, the situation can improve. Secondly, we need to recycle more products than we do. It might be true about the developed nations, but some of the developing countries are still behind in utilizing the process of recycling. Starting from waste water plants to recycle water, all metal, rubber and other garbage can be recycled. That way we can re-utilize the old materials without introducing a lot of new products in the cycle. In other words, the government should provide better means of recycling and desired facilities needed for the process to succeed. In summary, along with being a modern and technologically advanced world, the government can bring awareness and provide the ways to reduce the amount of waste generated.
We
live
in a modern society. With all technological advances, we should have clearer living conditions across the globe,
but
sadly
,
that is
not the reality. We are producing a lot more garbage in this day and age then ever
before
. I believe there are several reasons that amount up to this
failure and
we should work
hard
to resolve or address each of them.

Firstly
, the population around the globe has increased almost
exponentially
in recent years. To manage the growth of the population, the
government
of every country needs to put an extra effort to being awareness,
so
that it doesn't harm our
lives
.
For example
, I learned a lot from a recent seminar held at a local library, about how to produce less garbage. Prevention is always better than the cure. If
people
are equipped
with the desired knowledge, the situation can
improve
.

Secondly
, we need to recycle more products than we do. It might be true about the developed nations,
but
some of the
developing countries
are
still
behind in utilizing the process of recycling. Starting from waste water plants to recycle water, all metal, rubber and other garbage can
be recycled
. That way we can re-utilize the
old
materials without introducing
a lot of
new products in the cycle.
In other words
, the
government
should provide better means of recycling and desired facilities needed for the process to succeed.

In summary, along with being a modern and
technologically
advanced world, the
government
can bring awareness and provide the ways to
reduce
the amount of waste generated.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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