In many countries, television shows many foreign-made programmes. The dominance of imported entertainment is harmful to the cultures of these countries. v.4
In many countries, television shows many foreign-made programmes. The dominance of imported entertainment is harmful to the cultures of these countries. v. 4
Nowadays, foreign-made programs take their dominance in most countries, if not all. Undoubtedly, those programs bring about many negative effects. Chiefs among them are the adoption of bad habits and watching-addiction. For several reasons, I agree that the imported entertainment negatively affects the cultures of countries.
The first harm caused by imported foreign programs is the adoption of bad habits. In fact, foreign-made programs plant bad habits in their watchers which will be negatively reflected in their culture. For example, my neighbour is so obsessed with watching foreign- programs and he and he always intends to imitate and adopt such bad habits. As a result, he began to drink Alcohol and use drugs. Consequently, he caused many problems to his family in particular, and to his neighbours in general. This clearly shows us the danger the foreign programs may have on a community.
A second harmful effect of foreign-made programs is that they cause watching -addiction. In fact, many people, especially youth, are addicted to those programs. For example, my brother was a student who used to watch foreign- made programs every time and they left negative impacts on him. As a result, he became careless and indifferent to his studies to the point that he failed 3 exams. Consequently, he was dismissed from the university and is now jobless. So, it can be inferred that such programs have no benefits but serious effects.
To conclude, foreign –made programs are harmful to any community since they cause watching –addiction and bad habits adoption. To avoid above harms, governments are required to band foreign-made programs and replace them with local ones.
Nowadays, foreign-made
programs
take their dominance in most countries, if not all.
Undoubtedly
, those
programs
bring about
many
negative
effects. Chiefs among them are the adoption of
bad
habits
and watching-addiction.
For several reasons, I
agree
that the imported entertainment
negatively
affects the cultures of countries.
The
first
harm caused by imported
foreign
programs
is the adoption of
bad
habits
. In fact, foreign-made
programs
plant
bad
habits
in their watchers which will be
negatively
reflected in their culture.
For example
, my
neighbour
is
so
obsessed with watching
foreign-
programs and
he and he always intends to imitate and adopt such
bad
habits
.
As a result
, he began to drink Alcohol and
use
drugs.
Consequently
, he caused
many
problems to his family
in particular
, and to his
neighbours
in general
. This
clearly
shows
us the
danger
the
foreign
programs
may have on a community.
A second harmful effect of foreign-made
programs
is that they cause watching -addiction. In fact,
many
people
,
especially
youth,
are addicted
to those
programs
.
For example
, my brother was a student who
used
to
watch
foreign-
made
programs
every
time and
they
left
negative
impacts on him.
As a result
, he became careless and indifferent to his studies to the point that he failed 3 exams.
Consequently
, he
was dismissed
from the university and is
now
jobless.
So
, it can
be inferred
that such
programs
have no benefits
but
serious effects.
To conclude
,
foreign
–made
programs
are harmful to any community since they cause watching –addiction and
bad
habits
adoption. To avoid above harms,
governments
are required
to band foreign-made
programs
and replace them with local ones.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes