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In many countries, people are living in a “throwaway society” where things are used for a short time and thrown away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to? v.4

In many countries, people are living in a “throwaway society” where things are used for a short time and thrown away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to? v. 4
Quite a lot of countries are suffering with people belonging to live in a “throwaway society”, where the materials are used for a minimum period and then they are disposed. This essay will illustrate the reasons for this situation and the consequences of them. This generation people do not know the pain of earning each penny. This is likely to be the major reason for such a pathetic situation. However, this generation kid play an important for creation of such an environment. Parents are not willing to show the pain that they faced in their earlier days, as a result they start to provide luxury. The importance of materials and their cost is vanished. As an illustration, I personally feel responsible for this. My needs are always fulfilled by my parents, without negotiation, they tend to ensure I get whatever I want. As a result, I should give personal care to all of them I get. While, I tend to get bored of those items so easily and make it as a crap so that I would get a new one. A Few years ago, I got a brand-new phone, but as days passed, I turned out to show interest over a new mobile. If I had known the value of my old product, I would have not done this. As a result, money’s respect is lost. Habit of recycling has also gone down, which has also increased the presence many harmful pollutants. They release a lot of toxic gas, which is dangerous to health. Well, this is the duty of every citizen to create awareness to practise reuse, recycle and refuse. For example, as I am a student, I usually use a lot of notebooks. Instead of wasting papers and cutting down trees, I recycle every used page and reuse them for practising my lessons. But this needs to be cultivated in all individuals, as this will also increase the chances of rainfall in all the areas. As manufacturing of paper requires destruction of trees. In conclusion, this essay showed the reasons for people getting involved in a “throwaway society” and the impacts created by them. Well, it is depicted that the value of money and product is lost among this generation teenagers. It is interesting to note that parents are the backbone of this miserable state.
Quite
a lot of
countries are suffering with
people
belonging to
live
in a “throwaway society”, where the materials are
used
for a minimum
period and
then they
are disposed
. This essay will illustrate the reasons for this situation and the consequences of them.

This generation
people
do not know the pain of earning each penny.
This
is likely to be the major reason for such a pathetic situation.
However
, this generation kid play an
important
for creation of such an environment. Parents are not willing to
show
the pain that they faced in their earlier days,
as a result
they
start
to provide luxury. The importance of materials and their cost
is vanished
. As an illustration, I
personally
feel responsible for this. My needs are always fulfilled by my parents, without negotiation, they tend to ensure I
get
whatever I want.
As a result
, I should give personal care to all of them I
get
. While, I tend to
get
bored of
those items
so
easily
and
make
it as a crap
so
that I would
get
a new one. A Few years ago, I
got
a brand-new phone,
but
as days passed, I turned out to
show
interest over a new mobile. If I had known the value of my
old
product, I would have not done this.
As a result
, money’s respect
is lost
.

Habit of recycling has
also
gone down, which has
also
increased the presence
many
harmful pollutants. They release
a lot of
toxic gas, which is
dangerous
to health. Well, this is the duty of every citizen to create awareness to
practise
reuse, recycle and refuse.
For example
, as I am a student, I
usually
use
a lot of
notebooks.
Instead
of wasting papers and cutting down trees, I recycle every
used
page and reuse them for
practising
my lessons.
But
this needs to
be cultivated
in all individuals, as this will
also
increase the chances of rainfall in all the areas.
As
manufacturing of paper requires destruction of trees.

In conclusion
, this essay
showed
the reasons for
people
getting involved in a “throwaway society” and the impacts created by them. Well, it
is depicted
that the value of money and product
is lost
among this generation
teenagers
. It is interesting to note that parents are the backbone of this miserable state.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay In many countries, people are living in a “throwaway society” where things are used for a short time and thrown away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
388 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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