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In many cities there is little control on the design and construction of new houses Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same as the old house style in local areas Do the advantages v.1

In many cities there is little control on the design and construction of new houses Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same as the old house style in local areas Do the advantages v. 1
Although it is clear that when setting up a building, people are concerned about the design. Having the freedom to choose the design they want has both pros and cons but I believe whether the advantages overshadow the disadvantages depends on the areas where new buildings are constructed. The freedom in architectural designs allows the erection of exquisite buildings that generate people’s appreciation, which consequently raises the aesthetic values of a country and enhances economic chances. this can be clearly demonstrated in the tourism industry as people travel to look for unique attributes of the destinations. Take the Saigon Notre Dame Cathedral as an example. it does not need to comply with the surrounding building styles. With distinctive beautiful complex French architectural features, it has been the ultimate symbol Ho Chi Minh City, which attracts more than two millions of tourists every year. However, too much freedom in housing designs might be problematic in certain areas. There are places where building designs serve particular purposes, for example, to show local area’s cultural and historic values. If people here are allowed to freely build houses that do not follow the established guidelines, the aesthetic values will be compromised. For instance, contemporary buildings are not permitted to be constructed in Hoi An – an ancient town of Vietnam as this place remains an example of a South-East Asian trading port dating from the 15th to the 19th century and has become a UNESCO World Heritage Site. In conclusion, whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of little control on building designs depends on the local areas and their purposes.
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clear
that when setting up a
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building
,
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people
are concerned
about the
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design
. Having the freedom to choose the
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design
they want has both pros and cons
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but
I believe whether the advantages overshadow the disadvantages depends on the
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areas
where new
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buildings
are constructed
.

The freedom in architectural
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designs
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allows
the erection of exquisite
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buildings
that generate
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people’s
appreciation, which
consequently
raises the aesthetic values of a country and enhances economic chances.
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this
can be
clearly
demonstrated in the tourism industry as
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people
travel to look for unique attributes of the destinations. Take the Saigon Notre Dame Cathedral as an example.
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it
does not need to comply with the surrounding
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building
styles. With distinctive
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beautiful
complex French architectural features, it has been the ultimate symbol Ho Chi Minh City, which attracts more than
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two millions of
tourists every year.

However
, too much freedom in housing
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designs
might be problematic in certain
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areas
. There are places where
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building
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designs
serve particular purposes,
for example
, to
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show
local
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area’s
cultural and historic values. If
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people
here are
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allowed
to
freely
build
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houses
that do not follow the established guidelines, the aesthetic values will
be compromised
.
For instance
, contemporary
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buildings
are not permitted to
be constructed
in
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Hoi
An
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–
an ancient town of Vietnam as this place remains an example of a South-East Asian trading port dating from the 15th to the 19th century and has become a UNESCO World Heritage Site.

In conclusion
, whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of
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little
control on
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building
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designs
depends on the local
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areas
and their purposes.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay In many cities there is little control on the design and construction of new houses Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same as the old house style in local areas Do the advantages v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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