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Task 2 In many cities there is little control on the design and construction of new houses Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same style as the old house style in local areas Do t v.1

Task 2 In many cities there is little control on the design and construction of new houses Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same style as the old house style in local areas Do t v. 1
Schooling plays a key role in one's life that it should be free to individuals. I completely agree with this statement that the government should bear all types of expenses incurred at any stage of education. Firstly, It is very clear that by having the education you get aware of what is happening in societies and what is my role in that society? It gives you cognitive ability to think and take rational decisions of your life. For example, without pedagogical training one cannot even know that why we are here in this world. Hence, therefore, it is one of the reasons that why the education should be paid for all the time. Secondly, it helps you to live your life easily. On a daily basis many people communicate, give and take, and business with each other by using their educational skills. Whenever a businessman does his business he utilize his learnt business skills and get the most benefit for the most of the time. For example, Josef, a CEO of Amazon utilized his best in online business and currently he is one of the richest people on earth. Thus, it is another reason that education must be paid by the government all the time as it helps masses to live the easy life. In conclusion, I can conclude with strong agreement that education gives you awareness of society and also it makes your life way easier. Therefore, it is mandatory for the government to bear all the types of expenses at all stages of the education like primary, secondary and higher secondary.
Schooling plays a key role in one's
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life
that it should be free to individuals. I completely
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agree
with this statement that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should bear all types of expenses incurred at any stage of education.

Firstly
, It is
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very
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clear
that by having the
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education
you
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get
aware of what is happening in societies and what is my role in that society? It gives you cognitive ability to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
and take rational decisions of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
.
For example
, without pedagogical training one cannot even know that why we are here in this world.
Hence
,
therefore
, it is one of the reasons that why the
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education
should
be paid
for all the time.

Secondly
, it
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helps
you to
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live
your
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life
easily
. On a daily basis
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many
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people
communicate, give and take, and
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business
with each other by using their educational
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skills
. Whenever a businessman does his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
business
he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "utilizes", "utilized".
utilize
his
Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.
learnt
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business
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the most benefit for the most of the time.
For example
, Josef, a CEO of Amazon utilized his best in online
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business
and
currently
he is one of the richest
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
on earth.
Thus
, it is another reason that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be paid
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
all the time as it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
masses to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
the easy life.

In conclusion
, I can conclude with strong agreement that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
gives you awareness of society and
also
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
way easier.
Therefore
, it is mandatory for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to bear all the types of expenses at all stages of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
like primary, secondary and higher secondary.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
Change your language and you change your thoughts.
Karl Albrecht

IELTS essay Task 2 In many cities there is little control on the design and construction of new houses Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same style as the old house style in local areas Do t v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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