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In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same style as the old house style in local areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v.4

In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same style as the old house style in local areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v. 4
It is observed that control of the design or building of new houses rate has been frequently low in many cities. It is a common belief that individuals can alter their houses's style how like them. I will briefly elaborate its positive and negative terms supporting by advantages in this essay. In the modern life, city people can settle wherever they want such as flat, building or other home. However, new buildings have constructed mostly likes as the skyscraper. Thus, the people often have no alternatives. For the reason of it, new houses should be design people's needs. This straightforward situation can affect all life. If it would be done, everybody reaches peace. For example, a child who lives in a flat more happier than the child raised in a town house. The parents want to have more alternative residents for the healthy family structure. That is to say, having more choice can make benefit for the society, even it is just a design of a house or settlement. On the other hand, many citizens can earn only minimum wage. Their life standards are not good as wealthy ones, and they cannot choose their neighbourhood. Therefore, even also the more choice of flat or skylines they do not live in there. Clearly, no more thing to utilize for them to design or building specialities. For instance, according to a survey in a local university explain how many people live with a mortgage or pay rent monthly, is approximately 80 percent of all residents can deal with it. However, this bad situation can inhibited by the government to increase salary of individual support by some funds. So, everybody can reach the healthy living area. In conclusion, there are some advantages or drawbacks of designing new houses reflecting the individuals' needs. It is clear that more alternatives of special style of buildings can influence to keep healthy areas for the citizens.
It
is observed
that control of the
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design
or
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building
of
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new
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houses
rate has been
frequently
low in
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many
cities. It is a common belief that individuals can alter their
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houses's
style how like them. I will
briefly
elaborate its
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positive
and
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negative
terms supporting by advantages in this essay.

In the modern life, city
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people
can settle wherever they want such as flat,
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building
or other home.
However
,
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new
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buildings
have constructed
mostly
likes as the skyscraper.
Thus
, the
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people
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often
have no alternatives. For the reason of it,
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new
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houses
should be
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design
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people
's needs. This straightforward situation can affect all life. If it would
be done
, everybody reaches peace.
For example
, a child who
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lives
in a flat
Use only "happier" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
more happier
than the child raised in a town
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house
. The parents want to have more alternative residents for the healthy family structure.
That is
to say, having more choice can
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make
benefit for the society, even it is
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just
a
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design
of a
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house
or settlement.

On the other hand
,
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many
citizens can earn
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only
minimum wage. Their life standards are not
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good
as wealthy ones, and they cannot choose their
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neighbourhood
.
Therefore
, even
also
the more choice of flat or skylines they do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in there.
Clearly
, no more thing to utilize for them to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
design
or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
specialities.
For instance
, according to a survey in a local university
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explain
how
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many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
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live
with a mortgage or pay rent monthly, is approximately 80 percent of all residents can deal with it.
However
, this
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bad
situation can inhibited by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to increase salary of individual support by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
funds.
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So
, everybody can reach the healthy living area.

In conclusion
, there are
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some
advantages or drawbacks of designing
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new
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houses
reflecting the individuals' needs. It is
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clear
that more alternatives of special style of
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buildings
can influence to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
healthy areas for the citizens.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same style as the old house style in local areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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