Nowadays, the largest number of people from developed and rich countries are consuming their time in the least developing countries by doing some volunteer activities, for instance, teaching and building houses. In my opinion, it is a good job and it can bring many positive impacts on themselves and the local society as well.
The majority of people spending their short time doing some unpaid works can gain happiness through their work. For instance, some native English teachers teaching language to primary and high school student in underdeveloped countries, many have no money for them, but the reward of helping people and doing the good job brings happiness. In other words, sharing is the way of caring our community and sharing makes us all happy. Furthermore, doing unpaid works in those poorer countries leads some benefits for those volunteers and the local society as well. They can explore the valuable experiences throughout their work and they can learn the practical works. Take for example a doctor doing volunteer work in tropical poverty-stricken countries can gain many experiences and medical knowledge concerned with tropical diseases.
Finally, its advantages are not limited for only volunteers and it can also hit a huge impact on the local community. Sharing some useful and practical knowledge, for example, some vocational trainings to inhabitants in poorer countries are very effective way to promote their life. As a consequence, the rate of poverty can be reduced in that country.
In conclusion, more and more people from wealthy countries are very willing to help residents in pooper countries for their happiness and upgrading the capacity of knowledge. Such a kind of doing good things can bring many fruitful impacts on not only for the young people, but also for the local society.
Nowadays, the largest number of
people
from developed and rich
countries
are consuming their time in the least developing
countries
by
doing
some
volunteer
activities,
for instance
, teaching and building
houses
. In my opinion, it is a
good
job and it can bring
many
positive
impacts on themselves and the
local
society
as well
.
The majority of
people
spending their short time
doing
some
unpaid works can gain happiness through their
work
.
For instance
,
some
native English teachers teaching language to primary and high school student in underdeveloped
countries
,
many
have no money for them,
but
the reward of helping
people
and
doing
the
good
job brings happiness.
In other words
, sharing is the way of caring our community and sharing
makes
us all happy.
Furthermore
,
doing
unpaid works in those poorer
countries
leads
some
benefits for those
volunteers
and the
local
society
as well
. They can explore the valuable experiences throughout their
work and
they can learn the practical works. Take
for example
a doctor
doing
volunteer
work
in tropical poverty-stricken
countries
can gain
many
experiences and medical knowledge concerned with tropical diseases.
Finally
, its advantages are not limited for
only
volunteers
and it can
also
hit a huge impact on the
local
community. Sharing
some
useful and practical knowledge,
for example
,
some
vocational trainings to inhabitants in poorer
countries
are
very
effective way to promote their life. As a consequence, the rate of poverty can be
reduced
in that country.
In conclusion
, more and more
people
from wealthy
countries
are
very
willing to
help
residents in
pooper
countries
for their happiness and upgrading the capacity of knowledge. Such a kind of
doing
good
things can bring
many
fruitful impacts on not
only
for the young
people
,
but
also
for the
local
society.
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