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In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours? v.1

In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours? v. 1
The present age is fast paced and marked with the advancement of science and technology. As a result, we are turning into machines than human and that is resulting in a limited relationship even with the next door neighbours. Now, the relationship among neighbours is dismal than the past. This essay delves into the reasons for this distant relationship among neighbours and some ways to improve it. First of all, people, these days, lack their leisure hours. They are unable to arrange times for socialising. In fact, they are to follow the strict routines, execute respective occupational duties, and if someone fails, survival turns challenging for them. So, people cannot manage extra hours to spent with neighbours. As a result relationship among people declines. On contrary, often people do lack the sense of consideration. They seem to have less care for others. For instance, I have a neighbour in my next flat who is a singer and work at a local band. So, when he starts practising in the middle of the night, it is really irritating for me. I have notified the issue several times to him but that was of no use. So, I decided not to socialise with him anymore as his irrational behave developed an unpleasant feeling inside me about him. The similar scenarios are found randomly that is resulting in relationship decline. Actually, there are no specific ways to improve the relationship with neighbours. I believe the application of common sense is enough towards a healthy relationship with neighbours. The most important matter about this – each of the people should be aware of their rights and responsibilities, and limitations. For instance, I am not responsible for caring for my neighbour’s dog on my lawn or home. Similarly, the neighbours should also be aware of such issues so that any of their attitudes or activities cause trouble for others. when everyone will be aware of the issue, I think the relationship will come to a pleasant level.
The present age is
fast
paced and marked with the advancement of science and technology.
As a result
, we are turning into machines than human and
that is
resulting in a limited
relationship
even with the
next
door
neighbours
.
Now
, the
relationship
among
neighbours
is
dismal
than the past. This essay delves into the reasons for this distant
relationship
among
neighbours
and
some
ways to
improve
it.

First of all
,
people
, these days, lack their leisure hours. They are unable to arrange times for
socialising
. In fact, they are to follow the strict routines, execute respective occupational duties, and if someone fails, survival turns challenging for them.
So
,
people
cannot manage extra hours to spent with
neighbours
.
As
a result
relationship
among
people
declines
.

On contrary,
often
people
do lack the sense of consideration. They seem to have less care for others.
For instance
, I have a
neighbour
in my
next
flat who is a singer and work at a local band.
So
, when he
starts
practising
in the middle of the night, it is
really
irritating for me. I have notified the issue several times to him
but
that was of no
use
.
So
, I decided not to
socialise
with him anymore as his irrational behave developed an unpleasant feeling inside me about him. The similar scenarios
are found
randomly
that is
resulting in
relationship
decline.

Actually, there are no specific ways to
improve
the
relationship
with
neighbours
. I believe the application of common sense is
enough
towards a healthy
relationship
with
neighbours
. The most
important
matter about this
each of the
people
should be aware of their rights and responsibilities, and limitations.
For instance
, I am not responsible for caring for my
neighbour
’s dog on my lawn or home.
Similarly
, the
neighbours
should
also
be aware of such issues
so
that any of their attitudes or activities cause trouble for others.
when
everyone will be aware of the issue, I
think
the
relationship
will
come
to a pleasant level.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Mistakes

IELTS essay In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
332 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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