People have different views about the link between the concept of equality and individual accomplishment. In my opinion, both runs parallel as every individual gets a change to success in egalitarian societies irrespective of their gender or wealth, for instance.
Societies who provide equal opportunities to its citizens such as, educational rights, will produce more achievers because, education is the base to achieve anything, and the place where people can get basic as well as higher studies free of cost will have higher chances to accomplish their goals. In a contrary, in a non egalitarian society rich people can only get higher education, therefore the probability of success proportional to the overall population reduces. For example, in America where every individual has a right to get qualified have more successful population.
The relationship between the equal rights and achievement can also be explained by an example of a society with gender equality. A society which gives equal opportunities to all of its people irrespective of their gender will have a higher success ratio as compared to the societies who discriminate between them. Moreover, the number of people participating is proportional to the number of achievers so in societies providing equal chances for everyone results in more chances of victory.
In conclusion, both personal achievement and similar rights are directly proportional and the societies which offer the formal have higher successful population.
People
have
different
views about the link between the concept of equality and individual accomplishment. In my opinion, both runs parallel as every individual
gets
a
change
to success in egalitarian
societies
irrespective of their gender or wealth,
for instance
.
Societies who provide
equal
opportunities to its citizens such as, educational
rights
, will produce more achievers
because
, education is the base to achieve anything, and the place where
people
can
get
basic
as well
as higher studies free of cost will have higher chances to accomplish their goals. In a contrary, in a
non egalitarian
society
rich
people
can
only
get
higher education,
therefore
the probability of success proportional to the
overall
population
reduces
.
For example
, in America where every individual has a
right
to
get
qualified have more successful population.
The relationship between the
equal
rights
and achievement can
also
be
explained
by an example of a
society
with gender equality. A
society
which gives
equal
opportunities to all of its
people
irrespective of their gender will have a higher success ratio as compared to the
societies
who discriminate between them.
Moreover
, the number of
people
participating is proportional to the number of achievers
so
in
societies
providing
equal
chances for everyone results in more chances of victory.
In conclusion
, both personal achievement and similar
rights
are
directly
proportional and the
societies
which offer the formal have higher successful population.
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