It is important to consider how the count of old age people moving to live in old age homes with other elderly people has increased substantially. In some cases, the government reimburses the expenses of such people. However, I believe it is the wholesome duty of the family members to pay for the care provided to them.
Some people argue that the old age homes, developed for taking care of elderly people should be government funded because they are the citizens of a country and have served for it for so many years and hence, they should support them in their later age. Moreover, people have paid taxes to the government throughout their life and thus, it is their due responsibility towards them.
On the contrary, I support the view that family is ought to be looked upon when their parents turn old and need support financially. Parents are the one's who have helped their children in development whether it be personal or professional. Furthermore, they are the one who have also supported them financially in their school and college studies and provided all the leisures to them so that they can lead a happy, healthy and stress free life. Finally, when it comes to children, they should not step back in paying for the nurses who can take good care of the parents in old age homes.
In conclusion, although government should help in providing nominal cost of stay and nurses in old age homes, family members should be liable to pay for the expenses involved in taking care of the elderly people.
It is
important
to consider how the count of
old
age
people
moving to
live
in
old
age
homes with other elderly
people
has
increased
substantially
. In
some
cases, the
government
reimburses the expenses of such
people
.
However
, I believe it is the wholesome duty of the family members to pay for the
care
provided to them.
Some
people
argue that the
old
age
homes, developed for taking
care
of elderly
people
should be
government
funded
because
they are the citizens of a country and have served for it for
so
many
years and
hence
, they should support them in their later
age
.
Moreover
,
people
have paid taxes to the
government
throughout their life and
thus
, it is their due responsibility towards them.
On the contrary
, I support the view that family is ought to
be looked
upon when their parents turn
old
and need support
financially
. Parents are the one's who have
helped
their children in development whether it be personal or professional.
Furthermore
, they are the one who have
also
supported them
financially
in their school and college studies and provided all the
leisures
to them
so
that they can lead a happy, healthy and
stress
free life.
Finally
, when it
comes
to children, they should not step back in paying for the nurses who can take
good
care
of the parents in
old
age
homes.
In conclusion
, although
government
should
help
in providing nominal cost of stay and nurses in
old
age
homes, family members should be liable to pay for the expenses involved in taking
care
of the elderly
people
.
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27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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