Education and health are fundamental factors for any nation. Research shows that the gap that exists between the level of education in rich and poor countries has a tendency to increase with the time. I completely agree that the governments of richer nations should step forward to help the poor nations to overcome the obstacles they face in areas like healthcare, education and trade.
Education, health and trade are interconnected with each other and that is why an increase in educational level will very likely to affect both health and trade.
Many industrial and rich countries have enough resources at their disposal in order to help poorer countries. Nowadays there are plenty organisations funded by prosperous countries, which focus on helping third world countries by sending workers and volunteers to the poorer nations in order to help the development. Many even grants medical equipment and other necessary goods. Another way how rich countries help is by giving loans for development. However many governments refuse to give a financial aid due to the high risk involved.
But there is always a flip side of the coin and the government of such rich countries who help the poor nations should make sure that the fund they provide is utilised properly. Alternatively, they should take schemes like establishing schools, commercial places and hospitals in their authority rather than providing the fund to these poor nations.
In conclusion, governments should unite and take more responsibility for providing help to poor countries. Otherwise, the gap between poor and rich countries will continue to grow exponentially.
Education and health are fundamental factors for any
nation
. Research
shows
that the gap that exists between the level of education in
rich
and
poor
countries
has a tendency to increase with the time. I completely
agree
that the
governments
of richer
nations
should step forward to
help
the
poor
nations
to overcome the obstacles they face in areas like healthcare, education and trade.
Education, health and trade
are interconnected
with each other and
that is
why an increase in educational level will
very
likely to affect both health and trade.
Many
industrial and
rich
countries
have
enough
resources at their disposal in order to
help
poorer
countries
. Nowadays there are
plenty
organisations
funded by prosperous
countries
, which focus on helping third world
countries
by sending workers and volunteers to the poorer
nations
in order to
help
the development.
Many
even grants medical equipment and other necessary
goods
. Another way how
rich
countries
help
is by giving loans for development.
However
many
governments
refuse to give a financial aid due to the high
risk
involved.
But
there is always a flip side of the coin and the
government
of such
rich
countries
who
help
the
poor
nations
should
make
sure that the fund they provide is
utilised
properly
.
Alternatively
, they should take schemes like establishing schools, commercial places and hospitals in their authority
rather
than providing the fund to these
poor
nations.
In conclusion
,
governments
should unite and take more responsibility for providing
help
to
poor
countries
.
Otherwise
, the gap between
poor
and
rich
countries
will continue to grow
exponentially
.
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35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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