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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. • comics • books • radio • television • film • theatre v.5

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. • comics • books • radio • television • film • theatre v. 5
In our daily life, we communicate information through lots of different media like the internet, televisions, radios, books, cell phones, films etc. We are living in such a time when information is one of the most important issues and the information technologies as well as the communication media greatly influence our lives. The rapid-growing websites and TV channels are many of few little examples how the media are spreading to make information easily accessible. All the media for information interchange have advantages and disadvantages and not all can attract all types of audiences. Comics, books, radios, televisions, film and theatre are all very powerful media for communicating information. In my opinion books, televisions and film among those aforementioned six media are most effective. Books are the witness of history and the main source from which we gain knowledge. From a very ancient period till now, books have been working as the light-house for our society. In our childhood, we gather most of our knowledge and skills from books. It opens new horizons in front of us. The writer writes down their experiences, imaginations, knowledge, explanation etc. About each and every issue of our lives. Books are the long-lasting protocol to make a bridge between writers and readers. However, all people are not happy to read books. They expect something easier and more vivid. Music, radios, films is more appealing to them. Television is another powerful media. Watching television is a part of our daily life. Most of the people who have a TV set, watch programs, news etc. With apt attention. It is a strong medium for the Government and other organisations to send their messages to the mass population. Program representatives also broadcast the people's view and opinions about different controversial issues in TV programs. However, this medium has lots of demerits and bad impacts. Government and politically biased organisations often send negative and misleading news. Again young people watch different satellite channels and try to adopt the alien culture which is really harmful for the culture and tradition of a country. Films are an audio-visual representation and can catch the attention of people from different geographical locations, races and cultures. A good film can shape someone's morality and doctrine and the film-makers with their huge amount of money, are so careful to make their films realistic and eye-absorbing. Every film has a direct or potential message or moral. On the contrary, some films also bring a wrong message to us. For example, the protagonists are always smoking in the films and it seems that smoking is a good and smart habit. It causes many younger people imitate them smoking. In conclusion, I would like to state that the books, televisions and films are the most powerful and effective media for communicating information.
In our daily life, we communicate
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information
through lots of
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different
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media
like the internet,
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televisions
, radios,
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books
, cell phones, films etc. We are living in such a time when
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information
is one of the most
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important
issues and the
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information
technologies
as well
as the communication
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media
greatly
influence our
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lives
. The rapid-growing websites and TV channels are
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many
of few
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little
examples how the
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media
are spreading to
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make
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information
easily
accessible. All the
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media
for
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information
interchange have advantages and disadvantages and not all can attract all types of audiences. Comics,
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books
, radios,
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televisions
, film and
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theatre
are all
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very
powerful
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media
for communicating
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information
. In my opinion
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books
,
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televisions
and film among those aforementioned six
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media
are most effective.

Books are the witness of history and the main source from which we gain knowledge. From a
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very
ancient period till
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now
,
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books
have been working as the light-
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house
for our society. In our childhood, we gather most of our knowledge and
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skills
from
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books
. It opens new horizons in front of us. The writer writes down their experiences, imaginations, knowledge, explanation etc. About each and every issue of our
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lives
.
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Books
are the long-lasting protocol to
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make
a bridge between writers and readers.

However
, all
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people
are not happy to read
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books
. They
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expect
something easier and more vivid. Music, radios, films is more appealing to them.
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Television
is another powerful
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media
. Watching
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television
is a part of our daily life. Most of the
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people
who have a TV set,
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watch
programs, news etc. With apt attention. It is a strong medium for the
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Government
and other
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organisations
to
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send
their messages to the mass population. Program representatives
also
broadcast the
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people
's view and opinions about
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different
controversial issues in TV programs.
However
, this medium has lots of demerits and
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bad
impacts.
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Government
and
politically
biased
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organisations
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often
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send
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negative
and misleading news. Again young
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people
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watch
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different
satellite channels and try to adopt the alien culture which is
really
harmful for the culture and tradition of a country.

Films are an audio-visual representation and can catch the attention of
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people
from
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different
geographical locations, races and cultures. A
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good
film can shape someone's morality and doctrine and the film-makers with their huge amount of money, are
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so
careful to
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make
their films realistic and eye-absorbing. Every film has a direct or potential message or moral.
On the contrary
,
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some
films
also
bring a
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wrong
message to us.
For example
, the protagonists are always smoking in the films and it seems that smoking is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and smart habit. It causes
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many
younger
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people
imitate them smoking.

In conclusion
, I would like to state that the
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books
,
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televisions
and films are the most powerful and effective
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media
for communicating
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information
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
38Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. • comics • books • radio • television • film • theatre v. 5

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
464 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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