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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole? v.2

Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole? v. 2
The high-standard education is firmly marked the one of the primary factors, nevertheless a significant number of people unable to write and to read in our own time. There should be a widely range discussion about illiteracy level and its negative effects. The essay describes some causes and possible prediction of issue. The origins of this situation stem from two main factors. Firstly, overpopulation and secondly, people’s economic well being. The significant number of habitants is increasing and reaching up to 8 million people. For instance, post-soviet countries face myriad obstacles to settle down children to school. On the other hand, the teaching standards have been evaluated and the illiteracy level could not be estimated through the ability of writing or reading. Turning to second reason, namely economic power is reaching up day by day. Capitalism, which economic demands is stemmed from divides society and renews social-class again. In the result, institutes or companies make a huge amount of money in for better literacy. Experiments and statistics show poor and low-paid families are not able to afford their children’s education. Meanwhile, except of only a child others is not provided to study at university owing to financial hindrance. Both factors may dramatically reflect in some certain life's standard. Lack of teaching impacts joblessness rates. By this mean, a vast majority of people would be evaded writing and reading abilities in the result of overcrowding in the whole world. The downward effects of material considerations could lessen equality among the people and could diminish well-being. Apart from this it would appear social instability and civic dissatisfaction. In the sum up, low schooling quality and financial difficulties may weaken the literacy level. This is a big obstacle society’s development and well-being which governments should take action to overcome it.
The high-standard education is
firmly
marked the one of the primary factors,
nevertheless
a significant number of
people
unable to write and to read in our
own
time. There should be a
widely range
discussion about illiteracy level and its
negative
effects. The essay
describes
some
causes and possible prediction of issue.

The origins of this situation stem from two main factors.
Firstly
, overpopulation and
secondly
,
people’s
economic
well being
. The significant number of habitants is increasing and reaching up to 8 million
people
.
For instance
, post-soviet countries face myriad obstacles to settle down children to school.
On the other hand
, the teaching standards have
been evaluated
and the illiteracy level could not
be estimated
through the ability of writing or reading. Turning to second reason,
namely
economic power is reaching up day by day. Capitalism, which economic demands
is stemmed
from divides society and renews social-
class
again. In the result, institutes or
companies
make
a huge amount of money in for better literacy. Experiments and statistics
show
poor and low-paid families are not able to afford their children’s education. Meanwhile, except of
only
a child others is not provided to study at university owing to financial hindrance.

Both factors may
dramatically
reflect in
some
certain life's standard. Lack of teaching impacts joblessness rates. By this mean, a vast majority of
people
would
be evaded
writing and reading abilities in the result of overcrowding in the whole world. The downward effects of material considerations could lessen equality among the
people
and could diminish well-being. Apart from this it would appear social instability and civic dissatisfaction.

In the sum up, low schooling quality and financial difficulties may weaken the literacy level. This is a
big
obstacle society’s development and well-being which
governments
should take action to overcome it.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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