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If you were asked to send one thing representing your country toan international exhibition, what would you choose? Why? Usespecific reasons and details to explain your choice. v.1

If you were asked to send one thing representing your country toan international exhibition, what would you choose? Why? Usespecific reasons and details to explain your choice. v. 1
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lives
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today
. It gives us unlimited access to
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information
and enables us to
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find
out whatever we desire. In my opinion, this has a plethora of advantages to humans and is
certainly
a
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good
thing.

The way the Internet has shaped our
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lives
nowadays is undeniable
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because
of the
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information
it
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allows
us to access. Take Google,
for example
. It is one of the world’s most superior search engines. Whatever
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information
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people
need to know, all they
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have to
do is type a few words into the engine’s search bar and it gives them an enormous number of online articles to choose from and read their content. Despite the fact that
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some
of these articles might be inauthentic, most adults nowadays can discriminate between sources and can
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find
reliable articles that
meticulously
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describe
whatever topic they
are interested
in.

Moreover
, widespread access to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
is
especially
beneficial to students and researchers.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Sometimes
looking for a certain book in the local library can be a frustrating task.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
students prefer finding books online, be them free or paid, to save time and effort,
instead
of visiting multiple libraries and bookshops to look for the books they desire.
For instance
, researchers who study in remote universities
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
find
the Internet their most useful source since it enables them to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
find
a variety of scientific journals and magazines.

To conclude
, the way the Internet
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
us to obtain any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
from all over the world is definitely valuable to almost everyone. I
personally
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think
that all individuals benefit from having the ability and power to learn about anything they need at any time wherever they are.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay If you were asked to send one thing representing your country toan international exhibition, what would you choose? Why? Usespecific reasons and details to explain your choice. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
281 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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