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If you want to introduce new food items, drug, or any such thing, you have to get tested before you apply them on humans. And as per the current status of development in the biological sciences, we won’t have any other options other than testing them on v.2

If you want to introduce new food items, drug, or any such thing, you have to get tested before you apply them on humans. And as per the current status of development in the biological sciences, we won’t have any other options other than testing them on v. 2
Food, beverages, medicines or vaccines have to go through frequent experiments before they enter into the market. In the beginning, these tests are performed in different animal species for human health concern. Despite there are deficit in the alternative methods, animals testing are the only way to ensure the human safety. Many animals are tested multiple times to observe the risks and effects of the foods and drugs after their insertion in the animal body. It is because the animals and human show quiet similar responses. For example, rat shows maximum similarities with human rather than others. Later, the researchers examine the outputs and predict it’s proficiency in the mankind. The tests are repeated several times for the consideration to make sure that the results are reliable. Even though animal test are required for human benefits, it has lethal effects to the numerous wild lives. For examples, animals can become weak and sick due to the over dose and toxicity. In addition, many unwanted deaths are seen during the experiment which may drive to their extinction. Besides, ethical arguments have been rising around many countries for the animal survival. Furthermore, the protests for ban of animal testing are often seen in the roads. Moreover, the ideas, concepts, procedures and knowledge are needed to build up an alternative method to avoid the usage of the animals. In a nutshell, the safety concerns of the foods and drugs must be verified before they are consumed by the people. It is our duty to come up with alternative active approaches of animal testing to rescue the animals from this cruelty crime.
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before
they enter into the market. In the beginning, these
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tests
are performed
in
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different
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animal
species for
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human
health concern. Despite there are deficit in the alternative methods,
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animals
testing are the
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only
way to ensure the
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human
safety.

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animals
are
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tested
multiple times to observe the
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risks
and effects of the foods and drugs after their insertion in the
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animal
body. It is
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because
the
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animals
and
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human
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show
quiet similar responses.
For example
, rat
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shows
maximum similarities with
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human
rather
than others. Later, the researchers examine the outputs and predict
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it’s
proficiency in the mankind. The
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tests
are repeated
several times for the consideration to
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make
sure that the results are reliable.

Even though
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animal
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test
are required
for
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human
benefits, it has lethal effects to the numerous wild
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lives
. For examples,
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animals
can become weak and sick due to the over dose and toxicity.
In addition
,
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many
unwanted deaths are
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seen
during the experiment which may drive to their extinction.
Besides
, ethical arguments have been rising around
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many
countries for the
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animal
survival.
Furthermore
, the protests for ban of
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animal
testing are
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often
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seen
in the roads.
Moreover
, the
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ideas
, concepts, procedures and knowledge
are needed
to build up an alternative method to avoid the usage of the animals.

In a nutshell, the safety concerns of the foods and drugs
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must
be verified
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before
they
are consumed
by the
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people
. It is our duty to
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come
up with alternative active approaches of
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animal
testing to rescue the
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animals
from this cruelty crime.
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16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay If you want to introduce new food items, drug, or any such thing, you have to get tested before you apply them on humans. And as per the current status of development in the biological sciences, we won’t have any other options other than testing them on v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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