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Describe the process of getting a driving license in your country You should say What organization is responsible What qualifications or documents you need to offer to apply for What stages are involved and explain how you are tested v.1

Describe the process of getting a driving license in your country You should say What organization is responsible What qualifications or documents you need to offer to apply for What stages are involved and explain how you are tested v. 1
With coming 21 century social media sharply increased, according to communicating via internet resources like text massages became a popular. However, face to face communication has lost its place among people. I am of the view that, both of them should be in a balanced and in this essay I will explore my ideas with reasons and examples before coming to a conclusion. On the one hand, the use of modern technology has grown substantially leading to frequent use of video calls, emails, text messages and voice mails. Firstly, nowadays internet available in all parts of the world, people can communicate with their friends, family and clients across the world in any time of the day. Another important benefit of using text messages like Facebook, Instagram, Telegram is that, persons can discuss topics, exchange with opinions, give advise to each other for being different continents or countries. In addition, we can surf in internet and find any useful or absorbing information with one click. On the other hand, there are so many advantages of face to face communication, especially among people in our modern life. I am sure that, human cannot explore all emotions via internet text messages. For instance, you can chat with friends or family members, and they can write, I am good '' but, you do not know it was true or not. You cannot feel their natural emotions and cannot show you. Another necessary point is that, with face to face communication we can hug, touch, kiss and support our dear, I am convinced that it is the most important thing. To sum up, when we analyse the issue in depth, it becomes crystal clear that, everything should be in own place and in balance. In some cases internet is very helpful in our society, however we must never forget about face to face communicating with people.
With coming
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21 century
social media
sharply
increased, according to communicating via internet resources like
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text
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massages
became a popular.
However
,
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face
to
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face
communication has lost its place among
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people
. I am of the view that, both of them should be in a balanced and in this essay I will explore my
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ideas
with reasons and examples
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before
coming to a conclusion.

On the one hand, the
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use
of modern technology has grown
substantially
leading to frequent
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use
of video calls, emails,
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text
messages and voice mails.
Firstly
, nowadays internet available in all parts of the world,
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people
can communicate with their friends, family and clients across the world in any time of the day. Another
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important
benefit of using
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text
messages like Facebook, Instagram, Telegram is that, persons can discuss topics, exchange with opinions, give
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advise
to each other for being
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different
continents or countries.
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, we can surf in internet and find any useful or absorbing information with one click.

On the other hand
, there are
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advantages of
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to
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communication,
especially
among
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people
in our modern life. I am sure that, human cannot explore all emotions via internet
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text
messages.
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good
''
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, you do not know it was true or not. You cannot feel their natural emotions and cannot
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show
you. Another necessary point is that, with
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face
to
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face
communication we can hug, touch, kiss and support our dear, I
am convinced
that it is the most
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important
thing.

To sum up, when we
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the issue in depth, it becomes crystal
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clear
that, everything should be in
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own
place and in balance. In
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some
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internet is
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very
helpful in our society,
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must
never forget about
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to
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communicating with
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.
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IELTS essay Describe the process of getting a driving license in your country You should say What organization is responsible What qualifications or documents you need to offer to apply for What stages are involved and explain how you are tested v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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