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To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards. v.2

To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards. v. 2
To explain the term government official what we understand today who work for the State not for any individual entity. Government officials are to serve public honestly and efficiently. It is the constitutional duty and responsibility of the Government Officials to do so. In todays Bangladesh, it is very much clear to the people that Government Officials are not doing their duty to the public but they are working like the servants of individual political parties. Which is very unfortunate for the State and the people. Government officials are also called Public Servants which means they are appointed by the people, they should work for the people but in current situation this term can be explained as " Dust in the eye" of the people because public servants are no longer public servants but they are serving the evil purpose of the politicians who don' t think about the people not for a single moment. For example, we can look at the beaurocracy, judicial system, police administration of our country who are completely corrupted and there is no place for the public in these institutions. Officials are now appointed by political support here. Thats why they are not obidient to the people. People who are actually qualified for these posts are either being disqualified by lame excuses or are not given a chance to participate. This situation is not good for transparent governance. Public officials must be obidient to the people of the state. It is their duty to serve the people. If they are honest and dedicated to the people then they can lead us to a better future and if they are not then the state will drown in frustration and disappoinment. We the people always look up to these officials for justice. But Now a days justice is something which can be found either in narnia or disneyland.
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what we understand
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today
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State
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officials
are to serve
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public
honestly
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Officials
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people
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are not doing their duty to the
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public
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they are working like the
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servants
of individual political parties. Which is
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State
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which means they
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people
, they should work for the
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people
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people
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public
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not for a single moment.
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, judicial system, police administration of our country
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who
are completely corrupted and there is no place for the
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public
in these institutions.
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are
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now
appointed by political support here.
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why they are not
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obidient
to the
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people
.
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who
are actually qualified for these posts are either
being disqualified
by lame excuses or are not
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given
a chance to participate.

This situation is not
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good
for transparent governance.
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officials
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be
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obidient
to the
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people
of the
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state
. It is their duty to serve the
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people
. If they are honest and dedicated to the
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people
then they can lead us to a better future and if they are not then the
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state
will drown in frustration and
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disappoinment
. We the
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people
always look up to these
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officials
for justice.
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Now a days
justice is something which can
be found
either in
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narnia
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disneyland
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IELTS essay To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards. v. 2

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
311 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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