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if you are given an opportunity to study a subject which you have never studied, which subject will you choose? v.2

if you are given an opportunity to study a subject which you have never studied, which subject will you choose? v. 2
If I am given a chance to study a subject which I have never studied, then I will choose interior designing. I have many reasons for preferring this subject, and I will explain it in the following paragraphs. Firstly, I am a person who likes to spend my leisure times by making room decor items. I always like to keep my home neat and ordered with minimal furniture and artworks. Knowledge in interior designing will definitely help me to organize my home beautifully. For a calm atmosphere, the choice of colors in a house is crucial. Learning interior designing will help to understand which color is apt for a kitchen, or which color will create a peaceful environment in a study room or reading room. Secondly, I have a hobby of growing plants. One of my dreams is to grow an indoor garden in my home. I hope that studying interior designing will pave ways to fulfill this dream because I will get to know about suitable plants to plant in an indoor garden which requires optimum sunlight. In a home, decor such as wall hangings, fairy lights, etc. have a significant role in creating a pleasant mood. If you didn’t use the right products, then the results will be exactly the opposite. To avoid this, it is always better to enough knowledge about such decorative items before you purchase it. In this way, you can also save money. Considering all the above-mentioned advantages and practical applications, I will go for pursuing interior designing, if given an opportunity.
If I am
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given
a chance to study a subject which I have never studied, then I will choose
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interior
designing. I have
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many
reasons for preferring this subject, and I will
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explain
it in the following paragraphs.

Firstly
, I am a person who likes to spend my leisure times by making room decor items. I always like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
my home neat and ordered with minimal furniture and artworks. Knowledge in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interior
designing will definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to organize my home
beautifully
. For a calm atmosphere, the choice of colors in a
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house
is crucial. Learning
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interior
designing will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to understand which color is apt for a kitchen, or which color will create a peaceful environment in a study room or reading room.

Secondly
, I have a hobby of growing plants. One of my dreams is to grow an indoor garden in my home. I hope that studying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interior
designing will pave ways to fulfill this dream
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to know about suitable plants to plant in an indoor garden which requires optimum sunlight.

In a home, decor such as wall hangings, fairy lights, etc. have a significant role in creating a pleasant mood. If you didn’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the right products, then the results will be exactly the opposite. To avoid this, it is always better to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
knowledge about such decorative items
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before
you
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purchase
it. In this way, you can
also
save money.

Considering all the above-mentioned advantages and practical applications, I will go for pursuing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interior
designing, if
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
an opportunity.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay if you are given an opportunity to study a subject which you have never studied, which subject will you choose? v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
258 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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