Some would argue that despite responsibility, adulthood brings more joy in one’s life. Others believe that people enjoy the most in their life when they are adolescence and I agree with them because when people are young they are free of responsibility and able to do anything they want.
On the one hand, some would say that in adulthood, a person becomes successful and he does not have to anxious about their future. And Specially when people see their children growing and becoming successful in their career and then getting married is the most happiest time of one’s life and that is why most of the people in enjoy life in their adulthood as compared to teenage life. For example, a recent survey of the University of Karachi found that 66% of the people are satisfied with life in their adulthood. Nevertheless, it is not necessary that everyone becomes successful in their old age life.
On the other hand, people believe that teenage life is the best part of the life because there are no burdens on their shoulders. Moreover, everything looks so attractive because most of the things they are doing for the first time in their lives and they do not have to think about that there are dependent whom they have to feed. In addition to, chances are more to become successful in young life because they just have to think about their career. For instance, Mark Zuckerberg the founder of The Facebook became successful when he was adolescent. However, their whole future is dependent on the courses they choose in their teenage life, thus, they have to choose that carefully.
In conclusion, although many say that old age life makes the people more happy because of their success, I believe teenage life is the part of life that brings unforgetable moments in one’s life because one does not need to care about many things but own-self.
Some
would argue that despite responsibility, adulthood brings more joy in one’s
life
. Others believe that
people
enjoy the most in their
life
when they are adolescence and I
agree
with them
because
when
people
are young they are free of responsibility and able to do anything they want.
On the one hand,
some
would say that in adulthood, a person becomes
successful and
he does not
have to
anxious about their future. And
Specially
when
people
see
their children growing and becoming
successful
in their career and then getting married is the
most happiest
time of one’s
life
and
that is
why most of the
people
in enjoy
life
in their adulthood as compared to teenage
life
.
For example
, a recent survey of the University of Karachi found that 66% of the
people
are satisfied
with
life
in their adulthood.
Nevertheless
, it is not necessary that everyone becomes
successful
in their
old
age life.
On the other hand
,
people
believe that teenage
life
is the best part of the
life
because
there are no burdens on their shoulders.
Moreover
, everything looks
so
attractive
because
most of the things they are doing for the
first
time in their
lives and
they do not
have to
think
about that there are dependent whom they
have to
feed.
In addition
to, chances are more to become
successful
in young
life
because
they
just
have to
think
about their career.
For instance
, Mark Zuckerberg the founder of The Facebook became
successful
when he was adolescent.
However
, their whole future is dependent on the courses they choose in their teenage
life
,
thus
, they
have to
choose that
carefully
.
In conclusion
, although
many
say that
old
age
life
makes
the
people
more happy
because
of their success, I believe teenage
life
is the part of
life
that brings
unforgetable
moments in one’s
life
because
one does not need to care about
many
things
but
own
-self.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes