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Human activities have had a negative impact on clients and animals around the world. Some people think that it cannot be changed, while other believes action can be taken to bring about a change. Discussed both the views and give your Opinion? v.1

Human activities have had a negative impact on clients and animals around the world. Some people think that it cannot be changed, while other believes action can be taken to bring about a change. Discussed both the views and give your Opinion? v. 1
There is no denying the fact that, Flora and fauna both are are important parts of an ecosystem and due to some human activities, it is deteriorating day by day also, which has a negative impression on biodiversity across the globe and vice versa. I believe that, if we took corrective action in order to preserve the plant and animal species. To commence with those who urge that humans are completely responsible for the adverse effect on Forests and animals Globally. Deforestation occurred due to unsuitable human needs from Forest and wildlife. Some people consider that we cannot recover which is already demolished in terms rare species of plants and animals because it is simply controlled by nature, for example the forest is cut down for human needs such as the land requirement for agriculture, building homes etc. On the other hand, the majority of people believe that we can preserve the natural world we have it how if we took positive steps against deforestation and other responsible threats also, the government authorities should make a strict laws and follow properly in order to stop these activities. Moreover, the people need to understand the importance of natural wealth. We still need this wildlife and forest in order to balance life on earth. In conclusion, the plant and animal species which we already lost or not recoverable in certain cases. However, in my opinion, with proper actions and teaching people about the importance of natural wealth, we can save nature to save human beings.
There is no denying the fact that, Flora and fauna both
are are
important
parts of an ecosystem and due to
some
human
activities, it is deteriorating day by day
also
, which has a
negative
impression on biodiversity across the globe and vice versa. I believe that, if we took corrective action in order to preserve the plant and
animal
species.

To commence with those who urge that
humans
are completely responsible for the adverse effect on
Forests
and
animals
Globally. Deforestation occurred due to unsuitable
human
needs
from
Forest
and wildlife.
Some
people
consider that we cannot recover which is already demolished in terms rare species of plants and
animals
because
it is
simply
controlled by nature,
for example
the
forest
is
cut
down for
human
needs
such as the land requirement for agriculture, building homes etc.

On the other hand
, the majority of
people
believe that we can preserve the natural world we have it how if we took
positive
steps against deforestation and other responsible threats
also
, the
government
authorities should
make
a strict laws and follow
properly
in order to
stop
these activities.
Moreover
, the
people
need
to understand the importance of natural wealth. We
still
need
this wildlife and
forest
in order to balance life on earth.

In conclusion
, the plant and
animal
species which we already lost or not recoverable in certain cases.
However
, in my opinion, with proper actions and teaching
people
about the importance of natural wealth, we can save nature to save
human
beings.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Human activities have had a negative impact on clients and animals around the world. Some people think that it cannot be changed, while other believes action can be taken to bring about a change. Discussed both the views and give your Opinion? v. 1

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