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Scope CreepBusinesses that perform services or carry out projects for clients generally come to an agreement with their clients about the extent or scope of a project before beginning the project. However, as a project progresses, clients may ask for more v.1

Scope CreepBusinesses that perform services or carry out projects for clients generally come to an agreement with their clients about the extent or scope of a project before beginning the project. However, as a project progresses, clients may ask for more v. 1
Some countries face problems with "Brain Drain " it means many qualified specialists like doctors, nurses migrate to another country. This situation can lead to some social problems among the population. This essay will show possible solutions to this issue. Firstly, the main reason of losing good, skilled employees is a dissatisfaction of salary. Some workers serve their country for a long time for low wage, then they lose their patience and give up working place. For example, many experienced doctors have left Kazakhstan in searching for a better life in abroad. Moreover, any employment requires financial support from the government to develop or to improve the working places. What's more doctors should always get training courses and develop their skills in developing countries. If the state does not support doctors or other labourers, many of them will leave their hometowns in searching for good conditions. As a result the medicine will be in poor condition which can lead to unhealthy, poor nation. As we know any future depends on healthy population. Thus, it makes clear what can cause migration of good employees. The two possible solutions are undertaken to tackle this problem. Firstly, to solve this problem the government should raise wages and encourage them or even provide some skilled specialist with perks like free accommodation, meals or transport. Another solution is that the authorities should always provide hospitals or other working places with facilities. For instance, The hospitals needs well equipped laboratory or other equipments which are essential to treat local population. By doing this, the country will keep professionals. Therefore, these measures can stop migration of specialists. In conclusion, it is common to see in undeveloped countries, many qualified specialists change their country to other more developed countries. If the mentioned measures took into consideration, the executives could prevent the problem of leaving hometowns by professionals.
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it means
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doctors
, nurses migrate to another
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country
. This situation can lead to
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some
social
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problems
among the population. This essay will
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possible solutions to this issue.

Firstly
, the main reason of losing
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good
, skilled employees is a dissatisfaction of salary.
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Some
workers serve their
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country
for a long time for low wage, then they lose their patience and give up working place.
For example
,
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many
experienced
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doctors
have
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left
Kazakhstan in searching for a better life in abroad.
Moreover
, any employment requires financial support from the
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government
to develop or to
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improve
the working places. What's more
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doctors
should always
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get
training courses and develop their
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skills
in developing
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countries
. If the state does not support
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doctors
or
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labourers
,
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of them will
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leave
their hometowns in searching for
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good
conditions.
As a result
the medicine will be in poor condition which can lead to unhealthy, poor nation.
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clear
what can cause migration of
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good
employees.

The two possible solutions are undertaken to tackle this
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problem
.
Firstly
, to solve this
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problem
the
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government
should raise wages and encourage them or even provide
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some
skilled specialist with perks like free accommodation, meals or transport. Another solution is that the authorities should always provide hospitals or
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other
working places with facilities.
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,

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needs
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well equipped
laboratory or
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other
equipments which are essential to treat local population. By doing this, the
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country
will
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keep
professionals.
Therefore
, these measures can
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stop
migration of specialists.

In conclusion
, it is common to
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see
in undeveloped
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countries
,
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many
qualified specialists
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change
their
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country
to
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other
more developed
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countries
. If the mentioned measures took into consideration, the executives could
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prevent
the
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problem
of leaving hometowns by professionals.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Scope CreepBusinesses that perform services or carry out projects for clients generally come to an agreement with their clients about the extent or scope of a project before beginning the project. However, as a project progresses, clients may ask for more v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
309 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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