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How does the woman react to the university's announcement? State her reasons for agreement/rejection. v.1

How does the woman react to the university's announcement? State her reasons for agreement/rejection. v. 1
The swift happening in the world, especially in the field of technology has indeed raised a number of questions on the educational frontier. The importance of handwriting in one such yet a niche area to be rethought off. In olden days, physical written artefacts served as was the main mode of recording, archiving, publishing or even for communicating. A decent, understandable and clear writing was a prerequisite for most of the jobs while good hand writing was considered a leverage as it added the aesthetics associated with any written ideology owing to which the handwriting was prioritized as a critical aspect of early education. Not only did it enhance the look but also it brought in a disciple with rigorous practice. However the advancement in technology resulted in the replacement of written transcripts by computer typed reducing the above described advantage. Furthermore, The primary disadvantage when schools prioritize improving had writing skills is that the time spent on improving hand writing can be utilized for learning stuffs worthwhile. Adding to the disadvantages is the focus the aesthetic nature of hand writing draws sometimes outweighs the conceptual quality of the written content. To Illustrate, Let's consider a formula being written on two sets of paper, A shady, torn one and the other being a clean white paper. Does the output of the formula change between the papers? Thus, I would like to conclude on establishing my stance on the topic, In My opinion, advantages of diminished focus on handwriting clearly outweighs the disadvantage.
The swift happening in the world,
especially
in the field of technology has
indeed
raised a number of questions on the educational frontier. The importance of handwriting in one such
yet
a niche area to be rethought off.

In olden days, physical
written
artefacts
served as was the main mode of recording, archiving, publishing or even for communicating. A decent, understandable and
clear
writing
was a prerequisite for most of the jobs while
good
hand
writing
was considered
a leverage as it
added
the aesthetics associated with any
written
ideology owing to which the handwriting
was prioritized
as a critical aspect of early education. Not
only
did it enhance the look
but
also
it brought in a disciple with rigorous practice.
However
the advancement in technology resulted in the replacement of
written
transcripts by computer typed reducing the above
described
advantage.

Furthermore
, The primary disadvantage when schools prioritize improving had
writing
skills
is that the time spent on improving hand
writing
can
be utilized
for learning stuffs worthwhile. Adding to the disadvantages is the focus the aesthetic nature of hand
writing
draws
sometimes
outweighs the conceptual quality of the
written
content.

To Illustrate,
Let
's consider a formula being
written
on two sets of paper, A shady, torn one and the other being a clean white paper. Does the output of the formula
change
between the papers?

Thus
, I would like
to conclude
on establishing my stance on the topic, In My opinion, advantages of diminished focus on handwriting
clearly
outweighs the disadvantage.
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IELTS essay How does the woman react to the university's announcement? State her reasons for agreement/rejection. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
252 words
7
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