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The woman expresses her opinion of the announcement made by the University's Maintenance Department. State her opinion, and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion. v.1

The woman expresses her opinion of the announcement made by the University's Maintenance Department. State her opinion, and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion. v. 1
Now days, most of the people are involving themselves to take care of the environment. Although some people believe that state authorities should take proper initiative to control the environment. I completely disagree on this and in this essay I will support my opinions with examples. Firstly, people prefer to live in peaceful and green place where they feel positive to lead the life and pollution free. This could happen if they start with caring their surroundings. For example, in India most of the people have got proper awareness about the environmental changes like global warming. So, people started to plant trees across the city with the help of public service companies, although they are using biodegradable or recycling materials for packing. Secondly, Industries should also want to contribute for environment control like producing degradable or recycle products and they have to use alternate resources like solar power energy and wind energy instead of traditional oil or coal energy source. For instance, recently countries around the world started migrating to Electric vehicles. In India, the Government has passed strict law to stop manufacturing and selling of BS4 vehicles in the country and they are approaching the people to move for Electric vehicles which results in a good amount of pollution control. I strongly believe that this could result in good environment changes the way forward. To conclude, I believe most of the adolescent people are well educated and have plenty of knowledge about the environment changes. So, it is more important that both the industries and the Government authorities should join their hands together to save the environment to lead a peaceful and healthier life.
Now
days, most of the
people
are involving
themselves to take care of the environment.

Although
some
people
believe that state authorities should take proper initiative to control the
environment
. I completely disagree on this and in this essay I will support my opinions with examples.

Firstly
,
people
prefer to
live
in peaceful and green place where they feel
positive
to lead the life and pollution free. This could happen if they
start
with caring their surroundings.
For example
, in India most of the
people
have
got
proper awareness about the environmental
changes
like global warming.
So
,
people
started
to plant trees across the city with the
help
of public service
companies
, although they are using biodegradable or recycling materials for packing.

Secondly
, Industries should
also
want to contribute for
environment
control like producing degradable or recycle
products and
they
have to
use
alternate resources like solar power energy and wind energy
instead
of traditional oil or coal energy source.
For instance
, recently countries around the world
started
migrating to Electric vehicles. In India, the
Government
has passed strict law to
stop
manufacturing and selling of BS4 vehicles in the
country and
they are approaching the
people
to
move
for Electric vehicles which results in a
good
amount of pollution control. I
strongly
believe that this could result in
good
environment
changes
the way forward.

To conclude
, I believe most of the adolescent
people
are
well educated
and have
plenty
of knowledge about the
environment
changes
.
So
, it is more
important
that both the industries and the
Government
authorities should
join
their hands together to save the
environment
to lead a peaceful and healthier life.
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IELTS essay The woman expresses her opinion of the announcement made by the University's Maintenance Department. State her opinion, and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
275 words
7
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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