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How companies use different method to increase sales of their products. Discuss and give your opinion. v.2

How companies use different method to increase sales of their products. Discuss and give your opinion. v. 2
Nowadays companies use various strategies to increase their sales of their commodities. The most common methods such as advertisement through television programs, radio stations, websites and billboards placed in public places. In the following passage, how these modes are being used by the companies to improve their profit will be briefly explained. Television and radio are the vital media to reach common people of all parts of the country. Companies advertise a product by interim advertisement between programs by targeting different age groups. For instance, an ice cream company promote their product flavours by using variety of attracting colours which provokes children to buy them. In addition to that, some organization use newspapers front page to advertise their products this will help them spike their sales in leaps and bounds. Therefore, the above ways are being used by various firms to improve their products sales. Furthermore, advertisement through famous websites such as, facebook, news channels and ecommerce web pages are increasing day-by-day. Internet is easily available through mobile phones and these promotions will help the companies to introduce a new product to young generation people. For example, a car company unveiled their new launch through you tube which help the firm to showcase their model among wide audiences. Hence, advertisement through internet becomes an eccentric method to increase their sales effectively. To sum up, do the promotion benefit the company to improve their sales? Yes. Many companies have witnessed phenomenal sales of their product through various advertisement using wide channels.
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companies
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various strategies to increase their
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sales
of their commodities. The most common methods such as
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advertisement
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through
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used
by the
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companies
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improve
their profit will be
briefly
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explained
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people
of all parts of the country.
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Companies
advertise a
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product
by interim
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advertisement
between programs by targeting
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different
age groups.
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, an ice cream
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company
promote their
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product
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flavours
by using variety of attracting
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colours
which provokes children to
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buy
them.
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to that,
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some
organization
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use
newspapers front page to advertise their
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products
this will
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help
them spike their
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sales
in leaps and bounds.
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used
by various firms to
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improve
their
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products
sales.

Furthermore
,
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advertisement
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through
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famous
websites such as,
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facebook
, news channels and
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ecommerce
web pages are increasing day-by-day. Internet is
easily
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through
mobile phones and these promotions will
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help
the
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companies
to introduce a new
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product
to young generation
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people
.
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company
unveiled their new launch
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through
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you tube
which
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help
the firm to showcase their model among wide audiences.
Hence
,
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advertisement
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through
internet becomes an eccentric method to increase their
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sales
effectively
.

To sum up, do the promotion benefit the
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company
to
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improve
their
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sales
? Yes.
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companies
have witnessed phenomenal
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sales
of their
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product
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through
various
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advertisement
using wide channels.
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30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay How companies use different method to increase sales of their products. Discuss and give your opinion. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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