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How can people be encouraged to take public transportation? What needs to be done to make public transportation an effective option for more people in your town? v.1

How can people be encouraged to take public transportation? What needs to be done to make public transportation an effective option for more people in your town? v. 1
Nowadays, people tend to utilize their private cars instead of taking public transportation for reaching their destination that this way in turn causes to several problems, especially traffic on the roads which is one of the global issues all over the world. Therefore, people should be promised to the use of public transportation and needs should be met to make these vehicles as available means for more people. The aim of this essay is to examine the factors which have contributed to problem of using public transportation less and provide the solutions to encourage people to take these vehicles before conclusion is decided upon. The first step is to understand why the use of mass transit has decreased in towns. There are two main reasons for this. One of them is that some of these vehicles do not have conducive opportunities to travel or commute. For example, buses must take a long route to a destination to pick up passengers, which can make the journey too time-consuming for many people. Therefore, the vast majority of people have their own cars in urban areas. However, this problem can be resolved if people use other fast public transports as metro. This way will save time of passengers and they will be able to reach to their house, workplace and other places in time. Another cause of less interest in taking public transportation is that petty crime such as pickpocketing can be rife on some froms of these means of transportation. The thieves, taking advantage of the crowds of these vehicles, secretly carry out their ugly deeds. So, passengers have qualms about travelling or commuting in public transports and they consider their private cars safer. One option has to make mass transit out of danger which is to increase security measures on all public transports and to use all the latest innovative options of technology, such as special cameras. By taking these measures, it is possible to encourage people who have lost interest in taking public transportation to use them. Taking everything into consideration, there are various factors that have led to increase in utilizing private cars in lieu of mass transit and different solutions are taken due to solving this problem. Society should ensure steps to prevent this global issue from deteriorating further.
Nowadays,
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people
tend to utilize their private
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cars
instead
of taking
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public
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transportation
for reaching their destination that this way in turn causes to several
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problems
,
especially
traffic on the roads which is one of the global issues all over the world.
Therefore
,
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people
should
be promised
to the
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use
of
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public
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transportation
and needs should
be met
to
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make
these
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vehicles
as available means for more
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people
. The aim of this essay is to examine the factors which have contributed to
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problem
of using
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public
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transportation
less and provide the solutions to encourage
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people
to take these
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vehicles
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before
conclusion
is decided
upon.

The
first
step is to understand why the
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use
of mass transit has decreased in towns. There are two main reasons for this. One of them is that
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some
of these
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vehicles
do not have conducive opportunities to travel or commute.
For example
, buses
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must
take a long route to a destination to pick up passengers, which can
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make
the journey too time-consuming for
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many
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people
.
Therefore
, the vast majority of
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people
have their
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own
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cars
in urban areas.
However
, this
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problem
can
be resolved
if
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people
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use
other
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fast
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public
transports as metro. This way will save time of
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passengers and
they will be able to reach to their
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house
, workplace and other places in time.

Another cause of less interest in taking
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public
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transportation
is that petty crime such as
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pickpocketing
can be rife on
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some
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froms
of these means of
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transportation
. The thieves, taking advantage of the crowds of these
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vehicles
,
secretly
carry out their ugly deeds.
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So
, passengers have qualms about travelling or commuting in
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public
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transports and
they consider their private
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cars
safer. One option
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has to
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make
mass transit out of
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danger
which is to increase security measures on all
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public
transports and to
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use
all the latest innovative options of technology, such as special cameras. By taking these measures, it is possible to encourage
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people
who have lost interest in taking
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public
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transportation
to
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use
them.

Taking everything into consideration, there are various factors that have led to increase in utilizing private
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cars
in lieu of mass transit and
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different
solutions
are taken
due to solving this
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problem
. Society should ensure steps to
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prevent
this global issue from deteriorating
further
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay How can people be encouraged to take public transportation? What needs to be done to make public transportation an effective option for more people in your town? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
381 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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