In modern society, health specialists in different parts of the world say that people are not doing enough physical activities because they do not have a lot of time. Actually, it can be avoided, if physical performance will be the compulsory part in the job place or in the learning institution.
One of the main reasons why people not doing too much exercise because they do not have a lot of time. We are more concentrated on our studies or spending too much time in the workplace. It is because of advantages which can be a reason for a better career or a good mark. For instance, a recent study found that people after their work are very tired and in order to rest, they prefer to have some entertainment activities, rather do physical exercise.
A lack of physical activity leads to a range of serious problems, so it is important that this issue is solved. One possible solution is when the school or the job management team will launch a mandatory physical education program. This program should be short, so it will not affect the educational or work process. For example, according to the research, spending at least 15 minutes for physical activity will decrease the chance of heart attack.
In Conclusion, we do not do a lot of physical exercise and the reason for that is our busy lifestyle such as a school or office. If our main activity will be accompanied by physical study, we can avoid such a problem.
In modern society, health specialists in
different
parts of the world say that
people
are not doing
enough
physical
activities
because
they do not have
a lot of
time. Actually, it can
be avoided
, if
physical
performance will be the compulsory part in the job place or in the learning institution.
One of the main reasons why
people
not doing too much exercise
because
they do not have
a lot of
time. We are more concentrated on our studies or spending too much time in the workplace. It is
because
of advantages which can be a reason for a better career or a
good
mark.
For instance
, a recent study found that
people
after their work are
very
tired and in order to rest, they prefer to have
some
entertainment
activities
,
rather
do
physical
exercise.
A lack of
physical
activity
leads to a range of serious problems,
so
it is
important
that this issue
is solved
. One possible solution is when the school or the job management team will launch a mandatory
physical
education program. This program should be short,
so
it will not affect the educational or work process.
For example
, according to the research, spending at least 15 minutes for
physical
activity
will decrease the chance of heart attack.
In Conclusion
, we do not do
a lot of
physical
exercise and the reason for
that is
our busy lifestyle such as a school or office. If our main
activity
will
be accompanied
by
physical
study, we can avoid such a problem.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes