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House is the starting place of love hope and dreams. There is an ideological verbalisation that the magic thing about home is that it feels good to leave; it feels even better to come back. Although renting a house does not bring any monetary benefits to v.2

House is the starting place of love hope and dreams. There is an ideological verbalisation that the magic thing about home is that it feels good to leave; it feels even better to come back. Although renting a house does not bring any monetary benefits to v. 2
House is the starting place of love hope and dreams. There is an ideological verbalisation that the magic thing about home is that it feels good to leave; it feels even better to come back. Although renting a house does not bring any monetary benefits to the tenants it only generates monthly income for the landlord, purchasing a house helps to bring a sense of security and pride. In my opinion, the advantages of purchasing a house far outweighs the disadvantages of renting an accommodation. Owning a home gives offers a long-term benefit of security, equity and potential growth of personal wealth. The value of the home will appreciate and if one decides to sell, they can earn the profit of sale. Moreover, being a Homeowner allows creative control on their property. They can alter the property, including décor changes, landscaping and renovations, according to their needs and style. They can also generate additional monthly income by renting their property. To illustrate, purchasing a place of residence neither allow the interference from any nor there is any sudden notice of evacuation. On the contrary, renting a property does not offer any wealth creation or return on investment as the property does not belong to the tenant instead, it creates a burden on occupant to pay monthly rent to the landlord. Additionally, the lessee cannot renovate the property according to his needs and has to follow all the rule and regulations of the owner of the property. To elucidate, many flat owners do not allow the entry of pets into their property which creates an issue for the occupants having pets. To conclude, I vehemently agree that purchasing an accommodation gives the opportunity of freedom, safety and monetary compensation to the homeowners than renting a place
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House
is the starting place of
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love
hope and dreams. There is an ideological
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verbalisation
that the magic thing about home is that it feels
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good
to
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leave
; it feels even better to
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come
back. Although
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renting
a
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house
does not bring any monetary benefits to the tenants it
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only
generates monthly income for the landlord, purchasing a
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house
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helps
to bring a sense of security and pride. In my opinion, the advantages of purchasing a
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house
far outweighs the disadvantages of
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renting
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an accommodation
.

Owning a home gives offers a long-term benefit of security, equity and potential growth of personal wealth. The value of the home will appreciate and if one decides to sell, they can earn the profit of sale.
Moreover
, being a Homeowner
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allows
creative control on their
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property
. They can alter the
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property
, including
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décor
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changes
, landscaping and renovations, according to their needs and style. They can
also
generate additional monthly income by
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renting
their
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property
. To illustrate, purchasing a place of residence neither
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allow
the interference from any nor there is any sudden notice of evacuation.

On the contrary
,
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renting
a
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property
does not offer any wealth creation or return on investment as the
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property
does not belong to the tenant
instead
, it creates a burden on occupant to pay monthly rent to the landlord.
Additionally
, the lessee cannot renovate the
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property
according to his needs and
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has to
follow all the
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rule
and regulations of the owner of the
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property
. To elucidate,
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many
flat owners do not
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allow
the entry of pets into their
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property
which creates an issue for the occupants having pets.

To conclude
, I
vehemently
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agree
that purchasing
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "accommodation".
an accommodation
gives the opportunity of freedom, safety and monetary compensation to the homeowners than
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renting
a place
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay House is the starting place of love hope and dreams. There is an ideological verbalisation that the magic thing about home is that it feels good to leave; it feels even better to come back. Although renting a house does not bring any monetary benefits to v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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