Nowadays, many people are interested towards vehicles which are attractive and also fashionable items like jewellery and trendy clothes. But, the caring towards the family or work related aspects are drastically coming down with which there is an increase in the divorce cases and worsening the bonds.
Firstly, public view regarding the materialistic things and also the trendy items must be according to their needs but not to their greeds. This change can bring many changes in one's life. For example, one can spend more time spending with their family members, by focusing on their needs through eradicating their distraction on extra things which are not that important in life when compared to family and relationships.
Secondly, one should keep in mind that, it is unnecessary to crave for things which are not permanent in their lives. These cravings don't only distract us from relationships, but also tempt us to spend more money, which will at last become useless if they are more than a need. For example, keeping an eye on extra things will obviously make us spend money more, through which there is a chance to loose control on spending money. And also, this will make people more optimistic.
Summarizing the above points, though the trendy items attract us to focus more than need, they will adversely affect one's common life by seperating them with their partners or family. This obsession will also lead us through spending more money than needed. I conclude that our ethics and values are becoming disintegrating, which is an adverse effect on society.
Nowadays,
many
people
are interested
towards vehicles which are attractive and
also
fashionable items like
jewellery
and trendy clothes.
But
, the caring towards the
family
or work related aspects are
drastically
coming down with which there is an increase in the divorce cases and worsening the bonds.
Firstly
, public view regarding the materialistic things and
also
the trendy items
must
be according to their
needs
but
not to their
greeds
. This
change
can bring
many
changes
in one's life.
For example
, one can spend more time spending with their
family
members, by focusing on their
needs
through eradicating their distraction on extra things which are not that
important
in life when compared to
family
and relationships.
Secondly
, one should
keep
in mind that, it is unnecessary to crave for things which are not permanent in their
lives
. These cravings don't
only
distract us from relationships,
but
also
tempt us to spend more
money
, which will at last become useless if they are more than a
need
.
For example
, keeping an eye on extra things will
obviously
make
us spend
money
more, through which there is a chance to
loose
control on spending
money
. And
also
, this will
make
people
more optimistic.
Summarizing the above points, though the trendy items attract us to focus more than
need
, they will
adversely
affect one's common life by
seperating
them with their partners or
family
. This obsession will
also
lead us through spending more
money
than needed. I conclude that our ethics and values are becoming disintegrating, which is an adverse effect on society.
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