Grades encourage students to work harder at school. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v.1
Grades encourage students to work harder at school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 1
There is an opinion that instead of providing any kind of practical skills, every student should get only theoretical knowledge in order to pass in examinations. I completely disagree with the viewpoint as hand-on-experience in certain domains is quite beneficial for them.
To begin with, admittedly knowledge in core subjects such as physics or mathematics is essential. In fact, almost all entrepreneurs look for candidates with excellent academic grades. But, by gaining practical competencies in schools and universities they become more innovative. For instance, children exert extra efforts while learning painting or art and craft so that they produce unique artefacts.
Furthermore, another positive aspect of practical training is that students become self-dependent after completion of studies. Having said that academic subjects open wider opportunities for youngsters in terms of employment or business. These peripheral knowledge sometime is unable to solve minute problems of novice employees such as cooking food unless they have prior experience pertaining to this. Instantly, maximum number of IT professionals stay away from family struggle to eat healthy food because they had never learnt this skill before.
To conclude, although strong academic background leads to successful careers for many aspirants, practical skills are equally significant for overall development of children. Hence every child should not be deprived of such skills.
There is an opinion that
instead
of providing any kind of
practical
skills
, every student should
get
only
theoretical knowledge in order to pass in examinations. I completely disagree with the viewpoint as hand-on-experience in certain domains is quite beneficial for them.
To
begin
with,
admittedly
knowledge in core subjects such as physics or mathematics is essential. In fact, almost all entrepreneurs look for candidates with excellent academic grades.
But
, by gaining
practical
competencies in schools and universities they become more innovative.
For instance
, children exert extra efforts while learning
painting
or art and craft
so
that they produce unique
artefacts
.
Furthermore
, another
positive
aspect of
practical
training is that students become self-dependent after completion of studies. Having said that academic subjects open wider opportunities for youngsters in terms of employment or business. These peripheral knowledge sometime is unable to solve minute problems of novice employees such as cooking food unless they have prior experience pertaining to this.
Instantly
, maximum number of IT professionals stay away from family struggle to eat healthy food
because
they had never
learnt
this
skill
before
.
To conclude
, although strong academic background leads to successful careers for
many
aspirants,
practical
skills
are
equally
significant for
overall
development of children.
Hence
every child should not
be deprived
of such
skills
.
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