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Government should provide free public Transportation facilities 24/7 to reduce traffic congestion. To what extent do you agree or Disagree v.1

Government should provide free public Transportation facilities 24/7 to reduce traffic congestion. v. 1
With the increase in population, the incidences of traffic jam are also rising. Some people argue that the government should provide free public transport to reduce traffic congestion. In my opinion, this measure can solve the problem only to a certain extent. Due to urbanization most people now prefer to reside in cities or towns instead of rural areas. This is one of the main reasons for the high density of traffic on roads. At the same time, due to the advancement in technology, cars have become more affordable and fuel efficient. This has also increased the number of vehicles on the roads. The government is certainly trying to decrease road traffic by making public transportation smooth and speedy. For example, in a highly populated city like Ahmedabad BRTS system has been introduced which facilitates bus stations around the whole city. This bus service can be availed 24*7 by public but it is not free and hence many people prefer to use their own vehicle). Even if public transportation is free, many people will still prefer to use their own vehicles probably because buses and trains congested and less comfortable. What’s more, free public transport will be a burden on the exchequer. In my view, there are several other measures that the government can implement to reduce road traffic. For example, it should build wider roads, construct more flyovers and separate lanes for pedestrians and bicycle riders. At the same time, it should enforce strict traffic laws and encourage people to use eco-friendly modes of transport. To conclude, making public transport free of cost will definitely encourage more people to use it; however, those who prefer comfort and convenience over cost will still continue to use private vehicles and hence it is not an effective way to reduce traffic congestion.
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traffic
jam are
also
rising.
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people
argue that the
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government
should provide
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free
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public
transport to
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reduce
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traffic
congestion. In my opinion, this measure can solve the problem
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only
to a certain extent.

Due to urbanization most
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people
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now
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prefer
to reside in cities or towns
instead
of rural areas. This is one of the main reasons for the high density of
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traffic
on
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roads
. At the same time, due to the advancement in technology, cars have become more affordable and fuel efficient. This has
also
increased the number of
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vehicles
on the roads.

The
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government
is
certainly
trying to decrease
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road
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traffic
by making
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public
transportation smooth and speedy.
For example
, in a
highly
populated city like Ahmedabad
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BRTS
system has
been introduced
which facilitates bus stations around the whole city. This bus service can
be availed
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24*7
by
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public
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but
it is not
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free
and
hence
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many
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people
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prefer
to
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use
their
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own
vehicle
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. Even if
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public
transportation is
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free
,
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people
will
still
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prefer
to
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use
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own
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vehicles
probably
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because
buses and trains congested and less comfortable. What’s more,
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free
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public
transport will be a burden on the exchequer.

In my view, there are several other measures that the
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government
can implement to
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reduce
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road
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traffic
.
For example
, it should build wider
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roads
, construct more flyovers and separate lanes for pedestrians and bicycle riders. At the same time, it should enforce strict
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traffic
laws and encourage
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people
to
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use
eco-friendly modes of transport.

To conclude
, making
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public
transport
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free
of cost will definitely encourage more
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people
to
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use
it;
however
, those who
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prefer
comfort and convenience over cost will
still
continue to
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use
private
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vehicles
and
hence
it is not an effective way to
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reduce
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traffic
congestion.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Government should provide free public Transportation facilities 24/7 to reduce traffic congestion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
300 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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