The plan of how to spend money in the government has always created a great deal of discussion. Some people believe that money should be financed in public services and it is unnecessary to invest in the arts, such as music and theatre. Although I am aware of the great importance of Public services, arts should not be neglected.
On the one hand, public services determines the quality of life in the society. Some of the most important requirements of people are included in public services such as public schools, developed transportation system, medical services and etc. To be fair and square, man can survive without theatre salon, but without hospitals, his health will be challenged. Hence, the government should adequately finance on public services in order to prepare an acceptable life level for people.
On the other hand, music and arts are inseparable parts of a society's culture. Art is a common language between people all around the world. There has been a significant increase in the number of people who are interested in fields such as academic music. The arts also can be considered as an economic sector since it attracts tourists. Italy is a good example of an artistic country with high level tourism. So, ignoring the investment in arts such as music and theatre can be harmful for people's feelings.
To put it in a nutshell, according to the priorities, the majority of budget should be allocated for public services and also because of the society's intellectual development funding in the arts is not a waste of money.
The plan of how to spend money in the
government
has always created a great deal of discussion.
Some
people
believe that money should
be financed
in
public
services
and it is unnecessary to invest in the
arts
, such as
music
and
theatre
. Although I am aware of the great importance of
Public
services
,
arts
should not
be neglected
.
On the one hand,
public
services
determines the quality of life in the society.
Some
of the most
important
requirements of
people
are included
in
public
services
such as
public
schools, developed transportation system, medical
services
and etc
. To be
fair
and square,
man
can survive without
theatre
salon,
but
without hospitals, his health will
be challenged
.
Hence
, the
government
should
adequately
finance on
public
services
in order to prepare an acceptable life level for
people
.
On the other hand
,
music
and
arts
are inseparable parts of a society's culture.
Art
is a common language between
people
all around the world. There has been a significant increase in the number of
people
who
are interested
in fields such as academic
music
. The
arts
also
can
be considered
as an economic sector since it attracts tourists. Italy is a
good
example of an artistic country with high level tourism.
So
, ignoring the investment in
arts
such as
music
and
theatre
can be harmful for
people
's feelings.
To put it in a nutshell, according to the priorities, the majority of budget should
be allocated
for
public
services
and
also
because
of the society's intellectual development funding in the
arts
is not a waste of money.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes