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Fresh water reserves are becoming less worldwide. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions that can be done by countries and individuals? v.1

Fresh water reserves are becoming less worldwide. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions that can be done by countries and individuals? v. 1
It is a bitter truth that a stock of the pure water has decreased all over the world. There are many causes behind that. The remedies of the issue should be found by the nation as well as by the citizens. The causes and solutions for that are discussed with the relevant examples in the forthcoming paragraphs. Focussing on the reasons for a decreasing amount of fresh water, the foremost reason behind that is wastage of water. Water is a basic requirement of an individual. It has been used in many ways, such as, drinking, washing, cooking along with in industries for manufacturing. People are not aware about the proper usage of water. Thus, they do not know how to save the water. It can lead to a shortage of water. For example, I am studying Pharmacy. In our laboratories, distilled water is used in a higher amount. Students do not use tap water for washing. They use distilled water. Which is inconvenient. Additionally, lack of recycled processes of used water is one of the major factors. Therefore, there are many factors that can reduce the stock of a fresh water. Discussing the solutions, the most effective one is to recycle a used water on a daily bases. Government should provide a limited amount of water to the population. Furthermore, spreading an awareness by educating an individual can be a good remedy for the same. This problem can be solved by increasing the price of drinking water. For instance, in a country named by 'UAE', the rate of drinking water is very high. However, in India it is comparatively cheaper. Moreover, this issue can also be solved by using any suitable solvent in place of water. Thereby, by taking a proper step, a nation can control the amount of pure water. All in all, it can be concluded that, it has become a major problem worldwide. By the help of each and every person in the country, this issue can be solved. Although, it is not at all easy to do. But, it is not impossible as well.
It is a bitter truth that a stock of the pure
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water
has decreased all over the world. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
causes behind that. The remedies of the issue should
be found
by the nation
as well
as by the citizens. The causes and solutions for that
are discussed
with the relevant examples in the forthcoming paragraphs.

Focussing on the reasons for a decreasing
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amount
of fresh
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water
, the foremost reason behind
that is
wastage of
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water
.
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Water
is a basic requirement of an individual. It has been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
ways, such as, drinking, washing, cooking along with in industries for manufacturing.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
are not aware about the proper usage of
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water
.
Thus
, they do not know how to save the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
. It can lead to a shortage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
.
For example
, I am studying Pharmacy. In our laboratories, distilled
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water
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in a higher
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amount
. Students do not
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use
tap
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water
for washing. They
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use
distilled
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water
. Which is inconvenient.
Additionally
, lack of recycled processes of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
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water
is one of the major factors.
Therefore
, there are
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many
factors that can
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reduce
the stock of
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a fresh water
.

Discussing the solutions, the most effective one is to recycle a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
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water
on a daily bases.
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Government
should provide a limited
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amount
of
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water
to the population.
Furthermore
, spreading an awareness by educating an individual can be a
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good
remedy for the same. This problem can
be solved
by increasing the price of drinking
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water
.
For instance
, in a country named by 'UAE', the rate of drinking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
high.
However
, in India it is
comparatively
cheaper.
Moreover
, this issue can
also
be solved
by using any suitable solvent in place of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
. Thereby, by taking a proper step, a nation can control the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
amount
of pure water.

All in all, it can
be concluded
that, it has become a major problem worldwide. By the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of each and every person in the country, this issue can
be solved
.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, it is not at all easy to do.
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But
, it is not impossible
as well
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Fresh water reserves are becoming less worldwide. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions that can be done by countries and individuals? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
348 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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