It is observed that people spend their leisure time performing one or other activity. However, some individuals enjoy shopping in their free time. Some people consider purchasing items for enjoyment has positive outcomes while others refute this claim. Both these views will be critiqued before reaching a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are a group of people who consider shopping has benefits. The primary reason for believing this is the fact that with the increase in the consumers in the market, there will be growth in the job opportunities. In other words, the problem of unemployment will be ceased to a greater extent. This will not only help job seekers to fulfil their and family's day to day needs but also decrease the crime rate within the country.
On the other hand, some people believe that shopping for sake of amusement has many negative effects on society. People who have a tendency of buying things on daily basis just for fun end up buying many unwanted things, thereby, causing wastage of resources. In addition to this, people involved in shopping do not realise the importance of time in developing bonds with family members. This, it is obvious that considering shopping as entertainment not only results in wastage of assets but also wastage of precious time.
Therefore, it is hard to see how anyone can support the idea of shopping in ideal time following the analysing both points of views on this topic. It is felt that it would be best to minimise market time and consume the same for improving relations.
It
is observed
that
people
spend their leisure
time
performing one or
other
activity.
However
,
some
individuals enjoy
shopping
in their free
time
.
Some
people
consider purchasing items for enjoyment has
positive
outcomes while others refute this claim. Both these views will
be critiqued
before
reaching a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are a
group
of
people
who consider
shopping
has benefits. The primary reason for believing this is the fact that with the increase in the consumers in the market, there will be growth in the job opportunities. In
other
words, the problem of unemployment will
be ceased
to a greater extent. This will not
only
help
job seekers to fulfil their and family's
day to day
needs
but
also
decrease the crime rate within the country.
On the
other
hand,
some
people
believe that
shopping
for sake of amusement has
many
negative
effects on society.
People
who have a tendency of buying things on daily basis
just
for fun
end
up buying
many
unwanted things, thereby, causing wastage of resources.
In addition
to this,
people
involved in
shopping
do not
realise
the importance of
time
in developing bonds with family members. This, it is obvious that considering
shopping
as entertainment not
only
results in wastage of assets
but
also
wastage of precious time.
Therefore
, it is
hard
to
see
how anyone can support the
idea
of
shopping
in ideal
time
following the
analysing
both points of views on this topic. It
is felt
that it would be best to
minimise
market
time
and consume the same for improving relations.
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20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes