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Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. To what extent do you agree with this? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.3

Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. v. 3
Agriculture is the backbone of any nation and is safeguarded by the government by implementing duties on imports. This essay will discuss the reasons that I completely agree it is the best approach to protect the indigenous farmers and the economy in order to keep prices of commodities in check. To begin with, some people argue that placing special taxes on food imports is not beneficial for the consumers as those items are available at cheaper rates from other countries. Even though, it is a narrow outlook which could result in large scale unemployment of the local population. In India, for example, the majority of the people are practicing farming as their profession, but will be out of work if imports are permitted without any check. Thus, it is feasible in short term tenure, but it makes the country venerable as it will not be self-sufficient to produce its own food and during wartime However, creating a barrier between the local and the foreign products protects the domestic sector from the massive inflow of international products. This check is necessary as it inhibits import of cheaper materials which might hinder the domestic production and make them unsustainable. In India, for instance, cheap Chinese products flood the local markets, thus increasing the supply and causing demand supply imbalance. Importing eatables, moreover, without restriction, from other countries put undue financial strain on the economy. This is because the proceeds go to another enterprise and do not help in the advancement of the local goods. To illustrate, India alone imported more than 400 million dollars worth of cereals in the year 2017 which could have been avoided if the country was self-sufficient. Therefore, putting tariffs in place not only protects the regional producers, but it promotes the local industry to grow in the ever-rising competition. To conclude, every country must have a system to protect the local industry from the global competition as it is essential for the health of the economy.
Agriculture is the backbone of any nation and
is safeguarded
by the
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government
by implementing duties on
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imports
. This essay will discuss the reasons that I completely
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agree
it is the best approach to
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protect
the indigenous farmers and the economy in order to
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keep
prices of commodities in
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check
.

To
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begin
with,
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some
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people
argue that placing special taxes on food
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imports
is not beneficial for the consumers as those items are available at cheaper rates from other
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countries
.
Even though
, it is a narrow outlook which could result in large scale unemployment of the
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local
population. In India,
for example
, the majority of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are practicing farming as their profession,
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but
will be out of work if
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imports
are permitted
without any
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check
.
Thus
, it is feasible in short term tenure,
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but
it
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makes
the
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country
venerable as it will not be self-sufficient to produce its
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own
food and during wartime

However
, creating a barrier between the
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local
and the foreign products
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protects
the domestic sector from the massive inflow of international products. This
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
is necessary as it inhibits
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import
of cheaper materials which might hinder the domestic production and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them unsustainable. In India,
for instance
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
Chinese products flood the
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local
markets,
thus
increasing the supply and causing demand supply imbalance. Importing eatables,
moreover
, without restriction, from other
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countries
put undue financial strain on the economy. This is
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because
the proceeds go to another enterprise and do not
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help
in the advancement of the
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local
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
. To illustrate, India alone imported more than 400 million dollars worth of cereals in the year 2017 which could have
been avoided
if the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
was self-sufficient.
Therefore
, putting tariffs in place not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
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protects
the regional producers,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it promotes the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
local
industry to grow in the ever-rising competition.

To conclude
, every
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country
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have a system to
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protect
the
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local
industry from the global competition as it is essential for the health of the economy.
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IELTS essay Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
329 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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