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Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out although people have been aware of this problem for a long time Why do people do so little about it Give your suggestion on how to solve this problem v.4

Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out although people have been aware of this problem for a long time Why do people do so little about it Give your suggestion on how to solve this problem v. 4
We, humans, are being selfish since we knew that we are the most advanced creature of this world. We have been working with developments and research to enhance the possibility of improvement in mankind only. Very tiny activities have been carried out to save the plants and animals from decay, despite knowing about this condition. In this essay, the reasons for not caring about animals and plants, and the possible solution to this problem will be discussed in the following paragraphs in detail. Firstly, Humans are self-centred, we care about our self on this planet more than anything. We have been working with various research projects to improve the life possibilities of mankind on earth. The animals and plants cannot express their views and emotions immediately and humans working in this competitive world have no time to understand the mouthless creatures. For an example, the 90 per cent of wild plant infections is still unknown because the wild plants have very little importance to the city human individuals and it takes time to people to understand the problems of these wild plants. Secondly, we humans need to think on broader terms like for the future world. Furthermore, we need to be more social than present to care about our ecosystem. A spread of knowledge is must to promote the healthy environment for the sake of future. Improvements in Sanctuary, wild forests, and parks to support the growth and developments in animals and plants is a necessity. In conclusion, we humans being a top hierarchy, we should take a stand and spread knowledge for the care of the environment to have a better future for all the creature of this world.
We,
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humans
, are being selfish since we knew that we are the most advanced creature of this
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world
. We have been working with developments and research to enhance the possibility of improvement in mankind
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only
.
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Very
tiny activities have
been carried
out to save the
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plants
and
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animals
from decay, despite knowing about this condition. In this essay, the reasons for not caring about
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animals
and
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plants
, and the possible solution to this problem will
be discussed
in the following paragraphs in detail.

Firstly
,
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Humans
are
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self-centred
, we care about our self on this planet more than anything. We have been working with various research projects to
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improve
the life possibilities of mankind on earth. The
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animals
and
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plants
cannot express their views and emotions immediately and
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humans
working in this competitive
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world
have no time to understand the
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mouthless
creatures. For an example, the 90 per cent of wild
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plant
infections is
still
unknown
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because
the wild
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plants
have
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very
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little
importance to the city
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human
individuals and it takes time to
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people
to understand the problems of these wild plants.

Secondly
, we
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humans
need to
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think
on broader terms like for the future
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world
.
Furthermore
, we need to be more social than present to care about our ecosystem. A spread of knowledge is
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must to
promote the healthy environment for the sake of future. Improvements in Sanctuary, wild forests, and parks to support the growth and developments in
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animals
and
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plants
is a necessity.

In conclusion
, we
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humans
being a top hierarchy, we should take a stand and spread knowledge for the care of the environment to have a better future for all the creature of this
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world
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out although people have been aware of this problem for a long time Why do people do so little about it Give your suggestion on how to solve this problem v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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