Everyone has undergone through difficult changes and experienced ups and downs in his or her life. It is undoubtedly a normal trend in our life. However, I do not entirely agree that failure is dependent only on someone’s insufficient wish to succeed in a specific area.
It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that during evaluation of this situation many factors should be counted. Someone, for instance, may have set a goal to launch a business but unexpectedly got married. This case is understandable and does not deserve any blame. One may prefer making a family while another would rather continue going straightforward to his or her dream. It is an individual choice based on personal preferences and life principles.
On the other hand, I agree that failure means the person was not goal-driven and self-disciplined enough. This relates to many cases including a well-known problem with obesity. If a person has decided to lose a certain amount of weight then no obstacles should stop him. He does not have to give any easy or make excuses. In fact, if his goal is not achieved, as a result he will not prove to himself he is strong and motivated human being. It means his wish was not powerful enough.
The famous and great people of history have tried many things over and over again and there were lots of experiment that were not successful. The failure is not the key measurement of the determination and effort put towards accomplishing something. ,
One could draw the conclusion that everything depends on an individual. Human being may accomplish tremendous results as a proof of indescribably powerful motivation or end up without completing fully his task.
Everyone has undergone through difficult
changes
and experienced ups and downs in
his or her
life. It is
undoubtedly
a normal trend in our life.
However
, I do not
entirely
agree
that failure is dependent
only
on someone’s insufficient wish to succeed in a specific area.
It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that during evaluation of this situation
many
factors should
be counted
. Someone,
for instance
, may have set a goal to launch a business
but
unexpectedly
got
married. This case is understandable and does not deserve any blame. One may prefer making a family while another would
rather
continue going straightforward to
his or her
dream. It is an individual choice based on personal preferences and life principles.
On the other hand
, I
agree
that failure means the person was not goal-driven and self-disciplined
enough
. This relates to
many
cases including a well-known problem with obesity. If a person has decided to lose a certain amount of weight then no obstacles should
stop
him. He does not
have to
give any easy or
make
excuses. In fact, if his goal is not achieved,
as a result
he will not prove to himself he is strong and motivated human being. It means his wish was not powerful
enough
.
The
famous
and great
people
of history have tried
many
things over and over again and there were lots of experiment that were not successful. The failure is not the key measurement of the determination and effort put towards accomplishing something.
,
One could draw the conclusion that everything depends on an individual. Human being may accomplish tremendous results as a proof of
indescribably
powerful motivation or
end
up without completing
fully
his task.
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