Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’ To what extent do you agree with this statement? v.2
Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’ v. 2
GENERALLY, PEOPLE DO VARIOUS THINKGS TO BE SUCCESS IN THEIR LIFE, BUT SOMETIMES, THEY FAIL. SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT, THIS HAPPENS ONLY WHEN THEY DO NOT HAVE STRONG PASSION, WHICH IS THE EVIDENCE OF ANY FAILURE. FROM MY POINT OF VIEW, SOMETIMES LACK OF KNOWLEDGE COULD ALSO BE A PROOF FOR THIS AND HAVING NOT A STRONG DESIRE IN OTHER TIMES.
TO BEGIN WITH, THOSE WHO BELIEVE THAT, PEOPLE BECOME FAIL IN THEIR LIVES BECAUSE THEY HAD LESS WISH. I THINK, THIS OCCUR ONLY, WHEN PEOPLE CHOOSE THE ADVICE OF OTHERS, WHICH IS NOT APPROPRIATE FOR THEM BUT, THEY TEND TO DO SO DUE TO THE POSITIVE EFFECTS ON THEIR PARTNER CAREER. THEY THINK THAT, IF THEIR MENTOR BECAME SUCCESSFUL THEN HE OR SHE COULD ALSO SUCCEED IN IT. FOR EXAMPLE, ITALY USED SAME APPROACHES TO HANDLE THE CORONAVIRUS, WHICH WAS SPREADING FASTLY FROM ONE PERSON TO ANOTHER, THEY LOCKDOWN THE WHOLE COUNTRY AS CHINA DID. BUT, THE PERCENTAGES OF THIS VIRUS IN PEOPLE WERE SEEN TRIPPLED THAN THAT OF CHINA. SO, I THINK, ASPIRATION CANNOT PROOF THIS.
HOWEVER, IN SOME OF THE CASES, PEOPLE TEND TO STRUGGLE BECAUSE THEY DID NOT HAVE ENOUGH PASSION IN OTHER WORDS, IF A CHILD CONTINUE TO FAIL IN EXAMS, IT MEANS THAT, HE OR SHE NOT LIKE THE COURSE, SO THAT’S WHY, WITHOUT ANY PASSION FOR THAT FIELD CAN LEAD TO FAIL. BUT, THIS ALSO EMPHASSIS MORE ON CHOICES, THEY DO SO BECAUSE THEIR PARENTS ALLOWDED THEM TO TAKE SUBJECT ACCORDING TO THEIR PREFERENCES.
TO SUMMARIZE THIS, WE CANNOT EVIDENCE FAILURE WITH NOT STRONG HUNGER. I TATALLY DISAGREE WITH TIS STATEMENT. I THINK, BECOME UNSUCCESS BECAUSE THEY COPY OTHERS, WHICH IS THE STRONG PROOF OF ANY PEOPLE WHO FAIL IN HIS CAREER.
GENERALLY
,
PEOPLE
DO VARIOUS
THINKGS
TO BE SUCCESS IN THEIR LIFE,
BUT
SOMETIMES
, THEY
FAIL
.
SOME
PEOPLE
THINK
THAT, THIS HAPPENS
ONLY
WHEN THEY DO NOT HAVE
STRONG
PASSION, WHICH IS THE EVIDENCE OF ANY FAILURE. FROM MY POINT OF VIEW,
SOMETIMES
LACK OF KNOWLEDGE COULD
ALSO
BE A PROOF FOR THIS AND HAVING NOT A
STRONG
DESIRE IN
OTHER
TIMES.
TO
BEGIN
WITH, THOSE WHO BELIEVE THAT,
PEOPLE
BECOME
FAIL
IN THEIR
LIVES
BECAUSE
THEY HAD LESS WISH. I
THINK
,
THIS OCCUR
ONLY
, WHEN
PEOPLE
CHOOSE THE ADVICE OF OTHERS, WHICH IS NOT APPROPRIATE FOR THEM
BUT
, THEY TEND TO DO
SO
DUE TO THE
POSITIVE
EFFECTS ON THEIR PARTNER CAREER. THEY
THINK
THAT, IF THEIR MENTOR BECAME SUCCESSFUL THEN HE OR SHE COULD
ALSO
SUCCEED IN IT.
FOR EXAMPLE
, ITALY
USED
SAME APPROACHES TO HANDLE THE CORONAVIRUS, WHICH WAS SPREADING
FASTLY
FROM ONE PERSON TO ANOTHER, THEY
LOCKDOWN
THE WHOLE COUNTRY AS CHINA DID.
BUT
, THE PERCENTAGES OF THIS VIRUS IN
PEOPLE
WERE
SEEN
TRIPPLED
THAN THAT OF CHINA.
SO
, I
THINK
, ASPIRATION CANNOT PROOF THIS.
HOWEVER
, IN
SOME OF THE
CASES,
PEOPLE
TEND TO STRUGGLE
BECAUSE
THEY DID NOT HAVE
ENOUGH
PASSION IN
OTHER
WORDS, IF A CHILD CONTINUE TO
FAIL
IN EXAMS, IT MEANS THAT, HE OR SHE NOT LIKE THE COURSE,
SO
THAT’S WHY, WITHOUT ANY PASSION FOR THAT FIELD CAN LEAD TO
FAIL
.
BUT
, THIS
ALSO
EMPHASSIS
MORE ON CHOICES, THEY DO
SO
BECAUSE
THEIR PARENTS
ALLOWDED
THEM TO TAKE SUBJECT ACCORDING TO THEIR PREFERENCES.
TO SUMMARIZE
THIS, WE CANNOT EVIDENCE FAILURE WITH NOT
STRONG
HUNGER. I
TATALLY
DISAGREE WITH TIS STATEMENT. I
THINK
, BECOME
UNSUCCESS
BECAUSE
THEY COPY OTHERS, WHICH IS THE
STRONG
PROOF OF ANY
PEOPLE
WHO
FAIL
IN HIS CAREER.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes