Recently it has been argued among people that government should ban excessive sports games like sky diving and skiing. Although I do not agree with the statement of banning, actually these kinds of activities are played under strict supervision furthermore people are enjoying it in their leisure time.
Firstly, I believe that extremes games, for example sky diving and skiing are a little risky. And the government regulates these centres with strict rules and regulation. So far the individuals are not allowed without training and guidelines. Before going into diving all precautionary measurements are considered in the presences of trained personnel. My cousin was telling me her experience how they were trained before and during her whole sky diving a trainer was with them and giving instruction to enjoy it to the fullest.
Secondly, people are enjoying intense games and they feel the thrill of performing these activities in their free time. We all live in a world where everyone is busy in working or studying in which we all most forget to enjoy our life. So in this situation everybody needs an adventure game which make their life excited for some time. So I do not believe in banning such games.
To conclude, some thinker suppose that sky diving and skiing should bane and are dangerous for health, while I believe that these games are performed under full safety and people feel ecstasy in exploring such games
Recently it has
been argued
among
people
that
government
should ban excessive sports
games
like sky
diving
and skiing. Although I do not
agree
with the statement of banning, actually these kinds of activities
are played
under strict supervision
furthermore
people
are enjoying it in their leisure time.
Firstly
, I believe that extremes
games
,
for example
sky
diving
and skiing are a
little
risky. And the
government
regulates these
centres
with strict
rules
and regulation.
So
far the individuals are not
allowed
without training and guidelines.
Before
going into
diving
all precautionary measurements
are considered
in the presences of trained personnel. My cousin was telling me her experience how they
were trained
before
and during her whole sky
diving
a trainer was with them and giving instruction to enjoy it to the fullest.
Secondly
,
people
are enjoying intense
games and
they feel the thrill of performing these activities in their free time. We all
live
in a world where everyone is busy in working or studying in which we all most forget to enjoy our life.
So
in this situation everybody needs an adventure game which
make
their life excited for
some
time.
So
I do not believe in banning such games.
To conclude
,
some
thinker
suppose that sky
diving
and skiing should bane and are
dangerous
for health, while I believe that these
games
are performed
under full safety and
people
feel ecstasy in exploring such
games
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