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Explain how the lecturer’s claims give a concrete example of climate change’s effect on culture. Climate change hasn't always been seen as such a major factor in how we've progressed, how culture has developed. But more and more, we're f v.2

Explain how the lecturer’s claims give a concrete example of climate change’s effect on culture. Climate change hasn't always been seen as such a major factor in how we've progressed, how culture has developed. But more and more, we're f v. 2
The rain contamination has been rapidly raised and make a serious issue of clean cup. The environment damaged by people due to the discharging of chemical waste into the rivers, lakes and seas. In this essay I will discuss the radical measures and side effect of polluted liquor on the communities and animals. On the one hand, there are two major reasons why people are afraid of environment contamination because people acquire more money, so that they are damaging the ecosystem by dumped toxic waste into the rivers and that rain drinks by economically deprive people. As a result, the glass ailments have been ascended. The second reason of this is that, the vehicles spew obnoxious gases into the atmosphere and its deleterious to shift the ecosystem and ozone layer depletion, hence, the inner system gets damaged by not getting fresh air into the surrounding and sun rays deleterious for skin cancers. On the other hand, it is counterclaimed that, it is the fact that, there are many animals, endangered due to drinking of toxic waste booze, which affect on the inner immune system and raised the ailments Since, the chemicals dumped into the rivers, folks are more associated with health problems, and also its risk to aquatic life. Further and even more, not only the rain, pollution jeopardized the life, but also environment pollution is deleterious to society of people. By way of conclusion, earning is not only revolutionizing the life of living, so we all have taken steps to save the earth by reducing discharging squander into the liquor sources.
The rain contamination has been
rapidly
raised and
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make
a serious issue of clean cup. The environment damaged by
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people
due to the discharging of chemical waste into the rivers, lakes and seas. In this essay I will discuss the radical measures and side effect of polluted liquor on the communities and animals.

On the one hand, there are two major reasons why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are afraid of environment contamination
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
acquire more money,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they are damaging the ecosystem by dumped toxic waste into the rivers and that rain drinks by
economically
deprive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
.
As a result
, the glass ailments have
been ascended
. The second reason of this is that, the vehicles spew obnoxious gases into the atmosphere and
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
its
deleterious to shift the ecosystem and ozone layer depletion,
hence
, the inner system
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
damaged by not getting fresh air into the surrounding and sun rays deleterious for skin cancers.

On the other hand
, it
is counterclaimed
that, it is the fact that, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
animals, endangered due to drinking of toxic waste booze, which
Did you mean "effect"?
affect
on the inner immune system and raised the ailments Since, the chemicals dumped into the rivers, folks are more associated with health problems, and
also
its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
to aquatic life.
Further
and even more, not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
the rain, pollution jeopardized the life,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
environment pollution is deleterious to society of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

By way of conclusion, earning is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
revolutionizing the life of living,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
we all have taken steps to save the earth by reducing discharging squander into the liquor sources.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Explain how the lecturer’s claims give a concrete example of climate change’s effect on culture. Climate change hasn't always been seen as such a major factor in how we've progressed, how culture has developed. But more and more, we're f v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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