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Explain how the lecturer’s claims give a concrete example of climate change’s effect on culture. Climate change hasn't always been seen as such a major factor in how we've progressed, how culture has developed. But more and more, we're finding that it v.1

Explain how the lecturer’s claims give a concrete example of climate change’s effect on culture. Climate change hasn't always been seen as such a major factor in how we've progressed, how culture has developed. But more and more, we're finding that it v. 1
Artificial intelligence is the trending technology right now across the world. Some people believe that eventually this technology will be used to develop robots which will replace all human jobs. I disagree with this statement, and will explain my viewpoint in this forthcoming paragraph in detail. Firstly, to define artificial intelligence, it's a technology which replaces the human intelligence with a machine learned programmatic language. Technically speaking each and every job that is done by a human being could be converted to a programmable command and learnt by a machine to perform. To exemplify, self driving cars developed by Tesla are considered as robots. With several years of learning experiences and proper logic, the cars are programmed to drive safely. Having these kind of technological advancements, we can say a majority of the human jobs can be performed by robots. However, the human brain has tremendous intelligence power with several emotional quotients which cannot be fully replaced by artificially intelligent robots. Furthermore, cognitive ability that a human mind possesses can only sense the importance and criticality of the job and take a wise decision. For instance, a Psychiatric Doctor will be able to understand the mental situation of a patient with relevant questions and the most authentic response received from patients. To summarize, artificial intelligent robots might replace a majority of jobs going forward. However, it cannot replace the human touch that sense the emotional perspectives of some jobs. Moreover, this programme needs a continuous maintenance and monitoring to perform for which a human being is mandatory.
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used
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human
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. I disagree with this statement, and will
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explain
my viewpoint in this forthcoming paragraph in detail.

Firstly
, to define artificial
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intelligence
, it's a technology which
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replaces
the
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human
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intelligence
with a machine learned programmatic language.
Technically
speaking each and every
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job
that
is done
by a
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human
being could
be converted
to a programmable command and
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learnt
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self driving
cars developed by Tesla
are considered
as robots. With several years of learning experiences and proper logic, the cars
are programmed
to drive
safely
. Having
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these kind
of technological advancements, we can say a majority of the
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human
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jobs
can
be performed
by robots.

However
, the
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human
brain has tremendous
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intelligence
power with several emotional quotients which cannot be
fully
replaced by
artificially
intelligent robots.
Furthermore
, cognitive ability that a
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human
mind possesses can
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only
sense the importance and criticality of the
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job
and take a wise decision.
For instance
, a Psychiatric Doctor will be able to understand the mental situation of a patient with relevant questions and the most authentic response received from patients.

To summarize
, artificial intelligent robots might
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replace
a majority of
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jobs
going forward.
However
, it cannot
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replace
the
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human
touch that sense the emotional perspectives of
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some
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jobs
.
Moreover
, this
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programme
needs a continuous maintenance and monitoring to perform for which a
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human
being is mandatory.
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IELTS essay Explain how the lecturer’s claims give a concrete example of climate change’s effect on culture. Climate change hasn't always been seen as such a major factor in how we've progressed, how culture has developed. But more and more, we're finding that it v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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