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tpo36-3The man expresses his opinion of the proposal the student makes in the letter. State his opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion. v.1

tpo36-3The man expresses his opinion of the proposal the student makes in the letter. State his opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion. v. 1
Nowadays, supermarkets are stocked with fare products from around the world. Some would argue that it would be better if drink produce was not imported. I firmly believe that this view is correct, and will discuss the reasons why in this essay. It is certainly the case that importing snack can have a negative effect on local culture. This can be seen in countries such as Japan, where imported feed has become more popular than traditional, local produce, eroding people's understanding of their own cooking traditions. Although some would claim that this is a natural part of economic development in an increasingly global world, I feel strongly that any loss of regional culture would be detrimental. A second major reason to reduce imports is the environmental cost. Currently, many cooking imports, such as fruit, are transported thousands of miles by road, sea and air, making the product more expensive to buy and increasing pollution from exhaust fumes. Despite the fact that the trade in snack exports has existed for many years, I am convinced that a reduction would bring significant financial and environmental gains. However, many jobs depend on drink exports and some less developed countries may even depend on this trade for economic survival. In spite of this, the importance of developing local trade should not be undervalued. In conclusion, I am certain that reducing meal imports would have cultural and environmental benefits. What is more, the local economy should, in time, prosper commercially as the demand for local and regional products remains high resisting the competition from overseas.
Nowadays, supermarkets
are stocked
with fare products from around the world.
Some
would argue that it would be better if drink produce was not imported. I
firmly
believe that this view is correct, and will discuss the reasons why in this essay.

It is
certainly
the case that importing snack can have a
negative
effect on
local
culture. This can be
seen
in countries such as Japan, where imported feed has become more popular than traditional,
local
produce, eroding
people
's understanding of their
own
cooking traditions. Although
some
would claim that this is a natural part of economic development in an
increasingly
global world, I feel
strongly
that any loss of regional culture would be detrimental.

A second major reason to
reduce
imports is the environmental cost.
Currently
,
many
cooking imports, such as fruit,
are transported
thousands of miles by road, sea and air, making the product more expensive to
buy
and increasing pollution from exhaust fumes. Despite the fact that the trade in snack exports has existed for
many
years, I
am convinced
that a reduction would bring significant financial and environmental gains.

However
,
many
jobs depend on drink exports and
some
less
developed countries
may even depend on this trade for economic survival.
In spite of
this, the importance of developing
local
trade should not
be undervalued
.

In conclusion
, I am certain that reducing meal imports would have cultural and environmental benefits.
What is more
, the
local
economy should, in time, prosper
commercially
as the demand for
local
and regional products remains high resisting the competition from overseas.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay tpo36-3The man expresses his opinion of the proposal the student makes in the letter. State his opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
260 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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